This story is a sequel to Sunset's Redemption
What began as a normal dull afternoon for Pony Sweetie Belle quickly turned into one of the biggest adventures in this young filly's life. A dark potion, left by a servant of King Sombra, transports the little filly unicorn to the human world where she gets to meet the humans, including one that has the same hair style as her mane, and has the same name as her. In order to get home, she will have to relay on her human friends, but trouble comes up as human Sweetie Belle's sister doesn't listen to her, she has bullying issues with Diamond Tiara, and then there's the madpony trying to use her powers for some dark deed. Not to mention, her human counterpart may not want to give the pony version up. Will Pony Sweetie Belle ever return to Equestria? (Following after Sunset's Redemption/Set in Between Friendship Games and MLP Season 6).
I'm pretty sure that I've read this before. I also remember that the ending left something to be desired. Here's to this story being even better then last time.
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It's actually the same story I posted on Fanfiction.
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All right.
so 'through' is 'threw' for you and vice versa?
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At the time of writing this story, which was early in 2016, I had a tendacy to write 'Threw' instead of Through. That's been corrected in novels to come after this story.
So sweet!
I'm writing my own version of that story, which is different, but in my version, I'm going to have the human Sweetie Belle winding up running through the portal with her suitcase (small) and winding up in Equestria and it's up to the ponies and one other human to convince her to go back to her human home and give her family another chance to love her. And yes, I'm making sure that human Rarity goes bananas and falls to pieces so she never ever isolates her little sister Sweetie Belle ever again. I have reworked the villain: I created 3 villains in Sailor Moon's past: Dr. Lugae, Tellu, and Viluy the witches, and the main villain is 'Baron Von Sunday" from Lois and Clark, 1996 as he has eluded capture and has been frequenting Canterlot City for a long time and he is using voodoo and dark magic (Don Pedro Colley before his death portrayed 'voodoo characters in movie and Starsky and Hutch) to bring forth not only King Somba (whom will resemble Forest Whitaker as I go for major celebrities in my stories) and the Sailor Moon Crystal Dr. Tomoe who will be Germatoid! I base Canterlot City in my world as located in Japan by the Mugen section as the Mugen Infinity school was rebuilt into Canterlot High School. It'll take G Force, Spiderwoman, the Sailor Senshi, and even the Equestria Girls to stand up to the evil forces. I'm still working on what venture Sweetie Belle human will have in Equestria as she'll be human like Gulliver and will of course need 'dress' for her body. I'm playing with the notion to have the Chrysalis battle where Starlight, Trixie, and Discord of course team with her and maybe I'll put Sweetie Belle the human in there too that she gets to save the ponies, and her confidence will be the deciding factor to want to go home and try again with her family. When I end the story, there is a picture of human Sweetie Belle in the CMC club as the next mission is to help her and her 3 friends get their cutie marks, which I already wrote that particular story as I use timeline in my writing. The timeline of this story is November, 2014, and I really stress on 'sweeps.'
I would've liked to punch Rarity for her mean treatment of Sweetie Belle.
I've read this 20 times, and i still love it.
If you are still around, Thomas, I'm putting together a scene in my story where I'm having you appear as a hospital intern and you give Sweetie Belle encouragement to talk to her sister Rarity that's in a coma from a hit and run driver that Monday morning during other events happening. You tell Sweetie Belle to promise her sister she'll never hide things again and to cross my heart, hope to fly, and then Rarity like magically comes out of the coma to say stick a cupcake in my eye as Sweetie BElle then cries emotionally on her sister, Rarity promises to be a good sister forever, and I have Twilight, Rarity, and her Sweetie Belle, as humans, quietly in the background watching the scene. The twin human sweetie Belle is revealed at a big party that celebrates welcome home sweetie Belle forever and ever and also Elizabeth Wakefield and Tom Watts. Then there's of course human dancing and then Sweetie Belle says goodbye and thanks her twin and hopes she comes back longer as the twin Sweetie Belle says she will, and maybe bring her friends as twilight says she doesn't quite know about that one. Rarity quite agrees for double human CMC? Then Babs may want to go too! Let me know what you think as it seems like you've been off for some time.
Poor pony Sweetie Belle, at least she found a friend in the human CMC.
Good idea to include Babs Seed.
Glad Sunset was able to listen to Sweetie Belle, too bad Rarity interrupted it.
Good on you Pony Dimond, finding a way to help Sweetie Belle. You've become a better pony.
Nice remake of the song here.
Now the Rainbooms found the pony.
Now human Rarity realizes she made a mistake for not listening to her sister.
These action scenes are good.
I like the idea of the human CMC and their friends getting a pony-up.
If it's someone's own work, it makes perfect sense for them to do it.
Some people just don't care at times. And do it to make people suffer.
practice*
Earth, sweetie belle, your on planet earth.
And for some reason still a unicorn too?
But worse!
Thx DT.
Some things are sometimes best left a mystery.
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Mhm.
It's obvious alright that's Cinch.
Since when did they install a doorbell?
Many Rainbow, until eqg meets its end like fim. Although that didn't happen because eqg got cancelled instead.
disturb*
https://m.three*
You are a cartoon character.
Mhm.
I knew she could do it.
Or get yourself in trouble.
Turn on her if I were you, gettting someone suspected is just wrong!
They haven't. Also, unsisters isn't a word.
Must be silver spoon.
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Mhm.
Something tells me it might Sunset.
I find that a bit ridiculous.
There goes her one chance of telling Sunset where pony Sweetie Belle is.
No one can be perfect ma'am. Take it or leave it.
I do love my model trains!!!
Glad someone understand it.
Why did it have to be at CHS of all places. 🤦
A lot. 😒
https://m.Knowing they, I was probably her.
It was Cinch!
Well that's just perfect.
Yep!
You did your best, which is what counts. And it was just for fun.
Finally! 😎
Mhm, Rarity is guilty.
The truth hurts Rarity but it's true.
You seriously just couldn't go and talk to your sister and instead cry your emotions out! God damn it Rarity.
Something tells me that's a lie.
She is not weak, and she did it because you were nothing but a witch to her!
They're in some serious hot water now! 😰
Hell yeah, Daydream Shimmer time!
Kick his ass Twilight! 😆
Oh no! 😨
Right! ðŸ˜
Oh course...
It's true.
Well she's wrong, you choose the friends you want, no matter who they might be!
he stopped*
https://m.Well I'll be damned! 😦
Yes, earth is safe once again!
Face it, you've lost.
Good timing.
Second option is better than the first.
Oh I'm sure they will.
A " is missing.
Lol.
Not surprised about the last me.
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That explains so much.