this is brilliant

Please continue. I loved Luna the Matchmaker and am very interested to read more.

Excellent

>>10050111005011 He decided to break up Luna the Matchmaker. This would be part of the original story that is now considered the sequel. Somewhere around chapter 15ish I think.

Speaking of, how are you mate? Pulling this little stunt on me I did not foresee coming. It's quiet devious; I'm so proud.

Yay to nightly threesomes!

there is only one word to say: MORE

I remember this, but it was a bit futher down the road on devart. I like that's here easer to track and follow good job as always

why did you re-post the last chapter of matchmaker

>>10050481005048 And this is the logical place to break it, as it is 17 years after the grand wedding.

When i read "The voice that had taunted and tormented the mysterious mare all those years was now crying out for mercy" i shouted: "HOLY SHIT IT'S APPLE BLOOM!" (In italian, obviously). Good thing my mother just told me to shut up.

Continue this, i want to know how it will end.

Hold on a sec, i froze for a second just before the "Add Comment" button, and i thought: "Why did Apple Bloom left? What about all the other ponies?" This fanfic is plenty of possibilities for continuing it! Keep it up!

>>10053681005368 Indeed.

>>10051501005150 It seems he decided to separate from the last chapter on from Luna the Matchmaker and start a sequel, considering the time skip it seems like a good place to do it if he was going to do it.

Dlazerous wouldn't it be better to add a link in the summary or at the beginning of the first chapter to the matchmaker?

Amazing story

So good. More. Write more.

>>10050631005063

I think I already made that joke.  Except it was "sex nights", where the kids go to a baby sitter.

>>10050481005048

I'm glad that you approve.  A lot of people have suggested this since after the wedding the story takes a sort of new direction.  I'm working on the revision of the next chapter when we find out what happened in Ponyville since Apple Blooms absence.

>>10066771006677 Interesting.

>>10054021005402  yes, i will be altering the description of LtMM to reflect that the story continues with this newish fic

Love the new title! I think you picked a great place to make this a sequel and the added bit in there with Diamond Tiara was awesome!

>>10068101006810  Glad you like it

*cracks a whip* now get back to work but stop at the end of LtMM so I have a chance to catch up

*cowers* All right all right, back to my dungeon!

Stops at 10 right?

>>10072221007222  Yes

>>10054021005402 Technically, this isn't a sequel, since it, and MANY chapters afterwards, were/are already written as one story. He just realized that with the 17 year time skip, it was a natural breaking point, and would allow for the name of the fic to make better sense, since Luna isn't REALLY matchmaking anymore! xD

It started well, then I reached the part where Fluttershy ran for her husband.  Eenope.

First

for the first time, now to reading.

Very nice. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Im a little confused by the amount of OC's. Who is tootsie flute?

the last seventeen years seemed to crawl by unbearable slow.

unbearably

Everything you told you’re father was right, she does need you, more than either of you know.”

your

“You can count on me Princes.”  He said, blushing slightly.

Princess

Sweetie Belle gave her little brother a hug.  “Were here for her.

We're

Rainbow and Soaring told us she was back so we dropped what we were doing and rushed home.”

Soarin'

Than you again, I don’t know how I’ll repay you.”

Thank

“If your feeling up to it, maybe I can get Tootsie Flute and Dinky to visit, I know they’d love to see you again.”

you're

Laying in the bed in front of her was none other than her hated rival and now that shoo looked ant Diamond Tiara

she

at

HAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIL GRAMMAR !

I´m done reading and now a little poem:

I laughed and I cried,

but i´m not nearly satisfied,

your story good for more

and that I´m waiting for.

The story image intrigues me. I guess I have to read this now.

>>10097481009748Our brain is in a position even if the letters are in the wrong sequence to read the word correctly and to guess the context and grammar changes every few years, so who cares.

“You can’t be serious, he actually propositioned you?”  Diamond asked.

proposed to

I’d think about giving him a chance.”

thought

You had your friends, you’re family;

your

At first I though she was setting me up as some sort of joke but she wore that she was sincere.

swore

You’re grandpa Apple gave that ribbon to me when I was about you’re age.

your

The little purple unicorn colt was wearing a bowtie that was the same color as her mane.

his

It wasn’t till then that we realized you had left e the forest behind

I've got allot of work to catch up on as well as a letter to write to Applejack.

a lot

I walked out there and Dusk told me of you're sleeping issue.

your

I must say that you grew up every bit ... your mothers.

like

...That's because it's your name Honey."

"

If you keep perusing me you're only going to get hurt."

pursuing

>>10097101009710 Bon Bon and Lyra's daughter.

>>10098401009840

The little purple unicorn colt was wearing a bowtie that was the same color as her mane.

his

Actually that line IS correct. Garnet was wearing a bowtie the same color as Apple Bloom's mane, which is what the line is referencing.

Also holy-crap back story... also I totally read Jato's lines in Jay's voice. (you know from Mallrats, Clerks, Dogma, etc...)

Okay... I noticed the shout-out to South Park.  Specifically- to South Park: Bigger, Longer, and Uncut.

I can't believe that Apple Bloom didn't mention anything about Honey being her cousin.  You'd think she would.

>>10101911010191

Actually since Braeburn is her father and is AB's cousin, Honey would be her... second cousin I think.

>>10097101009710

Lyra and Bonbons daughter. If I remember correctly she there is actually a background filly in the show that is used for her.

>>10105011010501

No.  No, she wouldn't.  She would be her first cousin once removed, if Braeburn is Applejack's first cousin.  Second cousins share a set of great-grandparents.  For first cousins once removed, one's set of grandparents is the other's set of great-grandparents.

Regardless, that doesn't change the fact that they are cousins, which is my point here.  She should have said something about it.

>>10098401009840  some of these are correct but I'm not going to nit pic

>>10105791010579  I'll see what I can do to correct the oversight

>>10110801011080 and thus begins this generations spike and rarity

>>10110801011080

Great.  Seemed like that was oddly missing.

>>10118281011828 Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

>>10141091014109bad for your health

but a good thing for..... no its a bad thing

we need the loves dont make him wait to long or we will be sad

>>10142471014247  There will be Sad but Happy will come along soon enough

One complaint, you have it basically mentioning Apple Bloom met Dusk just before her return to Ponyville, however, when Dusk sees her at Garnet's he has no idea who she is. Might want to fix that.

>>10203131020313

He acted like he didn't know her.  Garnet doesn't know what happened between Apple Bloom and Dusk and that wont be revealed until around chapter 12 or 13

Not bad, looking forward to more.

One suggestion, you might want to add something to the description indicating that this is a sequel, would make for fewer readers getting confused about the OCs.

>>10207031020703

That's a rather long ways away, guessing around the _______ or so, if what your work on deviant art is a clue. (trying to keep spoilers to a minimum in case a new reader actually reads the comment)

that's what i'm trying to do

FIRST!  Ha, ha, this spot belongs to me!

Second, and a great chapter, I might add.

NO, only first not-autor-comment counts and dusk don´t want it so. First

<I>'Are they really going to let her berate their son like that?'</I> Might want to go fix that. Also when AB is in Garnet's mind, there were some other things like <b><i> that needs to be corrected.

Before i even start reading...

Let the batshit crazy BEGIN!

By the by... is Luna the Matchmaker complete yet? I've been haunting your DA gallery in search of an answer; last chapter I ran across was... 21 part 2. Where does this fall in the course of events?

Hey DL... why do I feel like I've read this story before? Like, months ago in your DA gallery... it's so damn familiar, for some reason...

Oh yeah...  read Chapter 3 on April 12 2012. I feel so cool.

You began to spell 'pinkie', 'pinky'. You might want to fix that near the end when AB is talking witg Rarity

Question: Why have Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell after 17 years no children?

after the other two good working mare-mare-relationship makes that no sense

or did i overread something

>>10282541028254 Fixed it... I can't believe i did that again.

>>10283561028356  Yes, Luna the Matchmaker is complete, the story continues with this fic.

>>10284071028407   Fixed it, thanks for letting me know.

>>10287301028730  No you haven't missed anything.  There is a very good reason they don't have children yet but you wont find that out for a few chapters.

Dat Pip.

Fabulous story--if there were any errors, I was too into the plot to notice.

Have a star, a thumb (sorry about the green paint!) and a fabulous moustache.

would be funny if I missed something after I've read all the chapters 4 times

(except for spelling and grammar errors, that was willed)

This chapter brought tears of happiness to my eyes. I sense a strong bond.

>>10288001028800 Good.

Some of the story is cheezy.....BUT STILL SO GOOD

Another great chapter. This is currently my favorite 'feel-good' story

>>10297531029753  Thanks, I'm glad you like it.  To point something out however,  the cheddar is on purpose, I'm trying not to be blatant with it it or slap the reader in the face with the cheese but I wanted it to have a very "I know where this is going" aspect to it; makes it easier to jerk people around emotionally especially when I get to the chapter about Dinky.  

Bravicimo! Encore! Encore! Also, yay to Discord being back! Hopefully he stays, and they find a way for him to use his special talent (silly way to think of it, I know) without making everypony miserable. I have an idea, but I like this story the way it is, so unless asked, I'll keep it to myself.

>>10053821005382 It's all explained in his previous fics. Once you read them, it's quite obvious that the mare is Apple Bloom after the first lines of her paragraph.

>>10097101009710 Actually, there were only 3 new OC's introduced so far, and one more was sighted. The rest is shown in the previous stories.

Soooo, did Rar already tell Spike that she's pregnant or is she hiding it? Again.

>>10319461031946 You did a good job revealing much with the cover image alone.

>>10362261036226  you opened your mouth so spit it out.

>>10371211037121

Ouch. How does "Chaos Fair" sound? Think about it, what better place for someone who thrives on chaos to let loose than a place where insanity is fun?

>>10373991037399  Unfortunately, He already promised Celestia, Luna and Twilight that he'd behave himself, plus, there is more at work here than Discord being helping ponies out.

>>10319461031946 so we gonna get to see Octavia and vinyls kid

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO DISCORD IS BACK HELLS YES

So we looking at a DisLestia pairing?

>>10479941047994  Yes, you'll get to see their kid.

>>10480411048041  Yes, you well get some DisLestia

YESSSSSSSS I LOVE YA BRO

>>10488361048836 YAY

All I want to know how did Pip become awesome?

Enjoy the new chapter!

Yay update !

That must have been a hell of a night

The three mares stood there, nearly speechless.  "Dear, trust me, Jato will defiantly like it."  Twilight said.

Definitely

I already read it on deviantART, could not wait

>>10607561060756 D'oh!  thanks for pointing that out

I wish I had that 'well that escalated quickly' picture

Honey's digging Jato's grave.

Yep, she is going to end up pregers and they will have a pickaxe wedding.  

New chapter, sorry if it's a little short.

Love it! Honey and Jato are so adorable together. Can't wait to read more.

Great chapter!

wow punched and crunched wow well could be worse GREAT WORK MATE!

>>10805081080508  "could be worse"

Don't worry, it will be...

>>10806581080658 Jato, you got some splanin’ to do

an i love lucy whatsamacallit

i frackin lost it at that

all in all great chapter

also

braeburn is walkin the green mile right now

straight to the chair

Two in one day, I'm on a roll... sorry for the short chapter again.

They are 16 for frogs sake!

//::SPOILER::\\

AND THEY ARE GETTING MARRIED!!!!!!!!!

>>10811661081166

"  Downstairs, Clyde answered the knock at his door.  Standing before him was Princess Luna, Applejack and a new pony he didn't recognize.  "Ladies, Princess.  Please come in.  I have a feeling I know what this is about."

I think you mean Princess Twilight....

great chapter keep up the good work

>>10812911081291

So? They are immortal. Might as well get everything done as soon as possible so then it is out of the way and they can enjoy the rest of their eternity together. Also there are some places from what I have heard where 16 is the legal age.

>>10812911081291 and Romeo and Juliet were 13, what's your point?

>>10813151081315 fixed

"Let your mother worry son.  Don't frown, I know a doctor who can get those feathers grown back in now time but until your wing heals, your grounded." I think Jato is the first Pegasus I read about who got grounded while being grounded.

So if they are Romeo and Juilet does that mean in three days we will have a chapter involving murder/suicide?