Luna takes a personal day at the request of her sister and Twilight Sparkle, but whilst visiting they each find something hidden in their hearts they didn't know was there....
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won't let me add this to my favorites list >:c but i just did a quick skim through, its pretty damn good so far if i may say so myself
keep it up!!
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Agreed
I really like where this is going! Cant wait for next update!
I like what you're setting up here.
Anyways, cool story. Not a huge fan of TwiLuna, but will do.
fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/219/1/9/happy_luna_by_ganton3-d45rspe.gif
Oh god Celestia hinting at things is never good foreshadowing!
And>>1137932 NEVER ENOUGH!
Umm, if full power Alicorn magic causes dread and fear in all who witness it. How does the Summer Sun celebration work where Celestia always raises the sun in front of a large crowd? If you'll recall it even inspired a certain little filly to study magic
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{HEADCANNON INBOUND}
When an Alicorn performs powerful magic like raising the sun or the moon, it causes dread and fear to those who are within close proximity, but also admiration and respect because, well, they're really powerful
There can never be enough twiluna and twilestia
Good work by the way
I'll be sure to follow.
Before I start reading, I want to know if this story ties in to your story The magic of Love at all?
Yay! More Twiluna! My favourite pairing that people actually write for!
... Nobody writes Twysalis...
Anyway, I like what you've done so far. There are a few places where your phrasing of certain sentences comes out rather awkward, and several portions feel slightly rushed. Not terribly rushed, but there are a couple places that I feel could've used just a bit more detail.
There's also the bit with alicorn magic inspiring dread, but that's just a personal issue with my own headcanon. You are, of course, entitled to your own thoughts on the subject, and if a little fear is the price of another great Twiluna fic, than I feel like I might just be robbing you.
Anyway, keep up the great work. I can't wait for your next update.
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Soft of
Wow. first my other story is featured, then this one? I have only one thing to say;
TwiLuna.....HUZZAH!
Why are there no Luna emoticons?
1149425 Or Vinyl and Octavia either.
You've definitely worked on these chapters, they flow with far greater ease than before.
Can't wait for the next one. 
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I knew you'd like them
1149530 Hell, I liked your story before, I'm definitely gonna like it when you improve it.
Me want more.
1149425dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
1149516dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png
Whoops, forgot to add actual comment. Great chapter. Though I have to ask... How does a mane like Luna's get knotted. It is the starry/flowing one isn't it?
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[HEADCANNON INBOUND]
The mane is crafted and made from pure Alicorn magic, but it's not powerful so it doesn't cause fear, when a Princess thinks stressful thoughts, erotic thoughts or thoughts about a physical activity, the mane becomes knotted as if they were actually doing those activities, hence the reason the mane was knotted.
This has been a Headcannon announcement brought to you by Senoria~De~La~Nieve
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Heh. I've read it. Twice. The problem is that the authour has three featured in progress stories and is juggling them all about. Updates are slow on all of them, but it's worth it.
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How do I get those?!?!
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dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
1149822 Copypasted from another comment that I got the information from:
"I Just Installed An Add-On For More Emoticons On FimFiction.net
It only works if you have Google Chrome or Firefox.
It's Called FiMFiction Enhancements 5 and it can be downloaded on Dropbox.com , but I forgot the link, Sorry
Hope It helps!"
Also found this link, and I remember using this website: http://userscripts.org/scripts/show/131623
You do need Chrome or Firefox though.
1149218 yay twiluna is right up there on my favs next to rainbow sparkle
Interesting idea: To make Nightmare Moon the voice of Luna's insecurities... of course, she always was, in the end, wasn't she?
nice work. And first post
I noticed 2 capitalization errors. The first was when Twilight waved at the cakes (unless she was actually waving at the baked goods).
The other was. it'll be nice to spend some time with Twilight.
Other than that this was great. Were you influenced by Sharing the Night? The star sight sure feels like it.
1150501
For that particular aspect yes I was influenced by Sharing The Night
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I feel better now I'm not just imagining things.
1148466
How is it sort of?
>>1150548
I'm saying nothing, have another Rarity Wink Face
Should it be 'land' instead of 'lad' ?
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Thanks!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Why didn't I ever look for these before?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Maybe I was too lazy.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png
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<_<
>_>
Yes.....
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Man im loving this story!
Still loving the elements you've added to this.
Just one thing though. In that last paragraph, shouldn't it be 'Celestia spread her wings' rather than 'wigs'?
Never thought she'd wear a wig. 
I can't wait to read more
D'aww! Luna's so cute when she blushes!
MOAR!!!
At least Twilight can get a couple hours sleep before the fun starts.
she is gonna need it.
Can i get a yes yes yes yes yes yes yes?
twilight.ponychan.net/chan/arch/src/130981456390.gif
Celestia totally knows what's going on
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Future plot points include Shining Armor being a possessive brother, Celestia being a possessive sister, and a relationship struggle
1155647 Celestia and Shiny? Possessive? ... This i gotta see/read
Already updated? Just sitting here playing Command and Conquer and then get an emaol that it updated. Time to read!
1156349
Well enjoy it :3
I'm liking this pace as well as the changes.
1156363any better than the last three I bet I will