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  • 3w, 5d
    Question from a fan.

    I wanted to share something with you all, a question from one of my many readers (I love you all)  I hope he doesn't mind but you are all so wonderful, I'm sure he/she wont.

    Volty Bolt asked, "Howdy I don't mean to bother you but um...When's Hope and Shadows going to update? If you could respond back rather quickly that would be awesome because I also wanted to know what is your method for writing such awesome stories."

    I think it's important to note that they asked this question nearly 4 weeks ago.

    This was my response:

    I am so sorry for the delay in this response, life has been sucking as of late.  

    Well, I guess the latest chapter went up recently, so there's part of your question answered.  As for the second, that's really hard to say.  I read... a lot (and not just FimFiction).  As such I've been influenced by a ton of different authors with their own style.  That would be my first suggestion, read... a lot.  Second, think of a story and simply write it down, then revise it, edit it, revise again, fill in gaps where you feel more information  should be added, revise again, edit, read it through.  Ask yourself, "Is this something you would want to read?"  Read it through again, then ask yourself, "could I be more descriptive?  Could I elaborate on this interaction or that sequence of events?"  Revise again, edit... you see where this is going?  I'm not finished with my stories either; All of them will be going through a revision and edit and possibly another revision and edit after I have finished with "Hopes and Shadows" (which my be broken into two separate stories, we'll have to see).  

    I know what you're going to ask. "If they're not done, why did you post them?"  That's the thing isn't it, I thought they were done and my readers liked them so much, they wanted more and so I wrote more, then reading through my stories again after all this time, I've found that their are areas where I could have gone into more detail and elaborated certain scenes and sequences that would make the stories better.  As you can see this is an ongoing process.  In truth I may never be, "finished" with my stories; "Curse of the Werepony" has been revised three times though some may not see the differences, and I'll be revising it again.  But that's part of the fun I suppose,  I love surprising my readers with enchantments to the stories they already love and making them stories they love all that much more.

    I hope this helps you, even a little.  If there's more I can offer, let me know.  You know, I may just put this in one of my Blogs, I hope you don't mind.  Happy writing(and reading, that's always important).

    1 comments · 64 views
  • 9w, 2d
    Where's the next chapter?

    It may be a while, I had to put my cat to sleep last monday and it's been a bit hard over here.  The inspiration has dried up but don't worry, I will finish this story.

    3 comments · 98 views
  • 15w, 3d
    The world just got a little sadder.

    I know this isn't very Pony related but I would have loved to see him voice a character in the show.  This god among men will be sorely missed.

    Robin Williams dead; family, friends and fans are 'totally devastated'

    4 comments · 79 views
  • 18w, 1d
    He did what with his what?!

    I'm back with a new chapter.  Originally I wasn't going to make this the last chapter before the epilogue but it was going to long and I didn't want you all to have slug through a 20,000 word chapter, so I broke it in two, next chapter soon(tm), hopefully.   I hope you all enjoy it the new chapter.

    4 comments · 112 views
  • 21w, 5h
    Where the heck is the neaxt chapter of Hope and Shadows?

    I got married on June 19th.

    21 comments · 253 views
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Life is good for Lyra and Bonbon but something is missing.  Bonbon wants more, she wants a foal and Lyra is faced with how to give the love of her life what she wants.

The story continues with Curse of the Werepony

First Published
3rd Apr 2012
Last Modified
3rd Apr 2012
#1 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

Great to see your work on FimFiction, hopefully you'll upload your other works as well?

#2 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

Finally it is up here, too! ^^

#3 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

loved it well written and made me daw at the end :pinkiehappy:

#4 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

Very nice! There were a few spelling errors scattered about, but nothing too terrible. Great story, can't wait for more! ^_^ :yay:

#5 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

Excellent story mate!

#6 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

It is good to see you finally putting something on FiMFiction. Love the stories you make

#7 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

Oho, so it's finally on Fimfic, huh? Great! This was probably my most favorite of your stories, but that's because I like one-shots that I don't have to wait for updates on! xD

#8 · 138w, 3d ago · · ·

And you were worried about hate :ajsmug:

#9 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

Haha it was too cute i wouldn't have found this if you had dent said you were posting something on fim ^^

#10 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

It good to see this on fim finally

#11 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

D'aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::heart::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::heart::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

#12 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

would i have to read this again to upvote and favorite it? :moustache:

#13 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

>And Tootsie Flute Makes Three

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

#14 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

awwwwww:fluttercry::heart:

#15 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

Loved reading on dA and I'm certainly gonna love reading it here:pinkiehappy:

Nice to see your work here man!!

#16 · 138w, 2d ago · · ·

Nice story.

#18 · 138w, 1d ago · · ·

Lovely story. I like how you decided to use horse reproduction and then properly stuck with it, too many mix things up and that just gets weird.

You have bean where you meant began when the foal was born.

#19 · 138w, 1d ago · · ·

>>408314

Thanks for letting me know about the wrong word, fixed it.

#21 · 138w, 17h ago · · ·

Not a big fan of clop fics (Even though this isn't one) Or ship stories, but I like the atmosphere of this.  I'm also pro-choice on everything I can think of, so I'm glad Twilight and the other citizens stepped in and put that bitch in her place.  Overall, I have mixed feelings about this due to the fact that romance isn't really my thing, but the characters and interaction are great.

#22 · 138w, 14h ago · · ·

"Have fun…" :rainbowlaugh: :facehoof:

"It's called magic for a reason, I don't have to explain a damn thing." :pinkiehappy:

D'awww... so much D'awww...

:heart::rainbowkiss::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

What a nice story :raritywink:

#23 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Yay for the doctor:pinkiehappy:

#24 · 138w, 4h ago · · ·

well, that derpy(ditzy) for ya

gives you the wrong thing for all the right reasons!

#25 · 137w, 6d ago · · ·

Always a lovely read :ajsmug:. This is the story that got me into reading your work, and I am so glad it's getting more acclaim here!

#27 · 137w, 5d ago · · ·

>>423183

I've been revising and editing the story, so as soon as I get verification that all the grammar and spelling errors are fixed, I'll update it here.

#28 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

Okay!  This version has been revised and edited for grammar (which I still feel is subjective) and spelling.  Also, some new material has been added in to hopefully make it easier to read and understand.

#29 · 137w, 2d ago · · ·

Well written, my friend.:twilightsmile::raritywink:

#30 · 137w, 51m ago · · ·

:scootangel::twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::twilightblush:hey are you gonna make another tootsie flute ficiton? please do i cant get enough of that foal:pinkiehappy:

#31 · 136w, 6d ago · · ·

>>448232

I don't have anything planned as of yet but she does reappear in another of my fics.

#32 · 136w, 6d ago · · ·

GUYRA :pinkiegasp:

Also

YOU, BEDROOM. NAOW

Made me lol :rainbowlaugh:

#33 · 133w, 5d ago · · ·

Sure hope there's going to be a sequal to this

#34 · 133w, 4d ago · · ·

O.k. so apparently weddings and child birth make me tear-up.

#35 · 132w, 6d ago · · ·

Didn't realise this was here, but I've read it now

goodnight for real this time

#36 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Wow. Just wow.

Am I the only one who wanted to see that carnival mare get an ass whooping??

And Lyra's mum as well!!!

I'm guess your next stories follow on from this one, as the all link to it as the beginning?

#37 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1456018  you are correct.  All of these stories exist in the same timeline.  Happy reading

#39 · 107w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Before, I was not onboard with Lyra/BonBon. But after this story:

LYRA/BONBON ALL THE WAY!!!

#41 · 107w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1558881 Yeah, I'm currently earring the werepony one. So far so good!:twilightsmile:

#43 · 103w, 3d ago · · ·

>>1738289  I saw this on deviant art as well.

#44 · 103w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1738770 Just out of curiosity, did you know that Tootsie Flute actually appears in the show??

#46 · 102w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Whoa-ho-ho! Now that was a well written story. Why did it take me so long to find it?

#47 · 102w, 12h ago · 1 · ·

>>1797467  My stories aren't that popular.  I think that's because there are no overt sex scenes or gratuitous gore.  Either way, I enjoy writing them and it makes me happy when others can enjoy them too, even if I don't rise to the level of popularity that "Cupcakes" enjoys.

#48 · 102w, 11h ago · · ·

>>1797617

I can't really see why that is. It's a great story. I actually enjoy the fact that you didn't put so much emphasis on the nitty gritty details as you did with the characters dialog and interactions. I think I'm gonna fave this, now that I think about it. And consider yourself watched, now.

#49 · 102w, 11h ago · 1 · ·

>>1797617

I can't really see why that is. It's a great story. I actually enjoy the fact that you didn't put so much emphasis on the nitty gritty details as you did with the characters dialog and interactions. I think I'm gonna fave this, now that I think about it. And consider yourself watched, now.

#50 · 102w, 11h ago · · ·

Double post. My bad. Stupid phone.

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