Life is good for Lyra and Bonbon but something is missing. Bonbon wants more, she wants a foal and Lyra is faced with how to give the love of her life what she wants.
The story continues with Curse of the Werepony
Great to see your work on FimFiction, hopefully you'll upload your other works as well?
Finally it is up here, too! ^^
loved it well written and made me daw at the end
Very nice! There were a few spelling errors scattered about, but nothing too terrible. Great story, can't wait for more! ^_^
Excellent story mate!
It is good to see you finally putting something on FiMFiction. Love the stories you make
Oho, so it's finally on Fimfic, huh? Great! This was probably my most favorite of your stories, but that's because I like one-shots that I don't have to wait for updates on! xD
And you were worried about hate
Haha it was too cute i wouldn't have found this if you had dent said you were posting something on fim ^^
It good to see this on fim finally
would i have to read this again to upvote and favorite it?
>And Tootsie Flute Makes Three
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE
Loved reading on dA and I'm certainly gonna love reading it here
Nice to see your work here man!!
Lovely story. I like how you decided to use horse reproduction and then properly stuck with it, too many mix things up and that just gets weird.
You have bean where you meant began when the foal was born.
Thanks for letting me know about the wrong word, fixed it.
Not a big fan of clop fics (Even though this isn't one) Or ship stories, but I like the atmosphere of this. I'm also pro-choice on everything I can think of, so I'm glad Twilight and the other citizens stepped in and put that bitch in her place. Overall, I have mixed feelings about this due to the fact that romance isn't really my thing, but the characters and interaction are great.
"It's called magic for a reason, I don't have to explain a damn thing."
D'awww... so much D'awww...
What a nice story
Yay for the doctor
well, that derpy(ditzy) for ya
gives you the wrong thing for all the right reasons!
Always a lovely read . This is the story that got me into reading your work, and I am so glad it's getting more acclaim here!
such a good ending
I've been revising and editing the story, so as soon as I get verification that all the grammar and spelling errors are fixed, I'll update it here.
Okay! This version has been revised and edited for grammar (which I still feel is subjective) and spelling. Also, some new material has been added in to hopefully make it easier to read and understand.
Well written, my friend.
hey are you gonna make another tootsie flute ficiton? please do i cant get enough of that foal
I don't have anything planned as of yet but she does reappear in another of my fics.
YOU, BEDROOM. NAOW
Made me lol
Sure hope there's going to be a sequal to this
O.k. so apparently weddings and child birth make me tear-up.
Didn't realise this was here, but I've read it now
goodnight for real this time
Wow. Just wow.
Am I the only one who wanted to see that carnival mare get an ass whooping??
And Lyra's mum as well!!!
I'm guess your next stories follow on from this one, as the all link to it as the beginning?
>>14560181456018 you are correct. All of these stories exist in the same timeline. Happy reading
Your story is beautiful Sir.
I look forward to reading moar.
Before, I was not onboard with Lyra/BonBon. But after this story:
LYRA/BONBON ALL THE WAY!!!
>>15588811558881 Yeah, I'm currently earring the werepony one. So far so good!
All credit to TriteBristle
>>17382891738289 I saw this on deviant art as well.
>>17387701738770 Just out of curiosity, did you know that Tootsie Flute actually appears in the show??
Whoa-ho-ho! Now that was a well written story. Why did it take me so long to find it?
>>17974671797467 My stories aren't that popular. I think that's because there are no overt sex scenes or gratuitous gore. Either way, I enjoy writing them and it makes me happy when others can enjoy them too, even if I don't rise to the level of popularity that "Cupcakes" enjoys.
I can't really see why that is. It's a great story. I actually enjoy the fact that you didn't put so much emphasis on the nitty gritty details as you did with the characters dialog and interactions. I think I'm gonna fave this, now that I think about it. And consider yourself watched, now.
Double post. My bad. Stupid phone.