Great to see your work on FimFiction, hopefully you'll upload your other works as well?

Finally it is up here, too! ^^

loved it well written and made me daw at the end

Very nice! There were a few spelling errors scattered about, but nothing too terrible. Great story, can't wait for more! ^_^

Excellent story mate!

It is good to see you finally putting something on FiMFiction. Love the stories you make

Oho, so it's finally on Fimfic, huh? Great! This was probably my most favorite of your stories, but that's because I like one-shots that I don't have to wait for updates on! xD

And you were worried about hate

Haha it was too cute i wouldn't have found this if you had dent said you were posting something on fim ^^

It good to see this on fim finally

D'aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

would i have to read this again to upvote and favorite it?

>And Tootsie Flute Makes Three

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

awwwwww

Loved reading on dA and I'm certainly gonna love reading it here

Nice to see your work here man!!

Nice story.

>>404221404221

I DON'T

Lovely story. I like how you decided to use horse reproduction and then properly stuck with it, too many mix things up and that just gets weird.

You have bean where you meant began when the foal was born.

>>408314408314

Thanks for letting me know about the wrong word, fixed it.

>>408637408637

No prob.

Not a big fan of clop fics (Even though this isn't one) Or ship stories, but I like the atmosphere of this.  I'm also pro-choice on everything I can think of, so I'm glad Twilight and the other citizens stepped in and put that bitch in her place.  Overall, I have mixed feelings about this due to the fact that romance isn't really my thing, but the characters and interaction are great.

"Have fun…"

"It's called magic for a reason, I don't have to explain a damn thing."

D'awww... so much D'awww...

What a nice story

Yay for the doctor

well, that derpy(ditzy) for ya

gives you the wrong thing for all the right reasons!

Always a lovely read . This is the story that got me into reading your work, and I am so glad it's getting more acclaim here!

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such a good ending

>>423183423183

I've been revising and editing the story, so as soon as I get verification that all the grammar and spelling errors are fixed, I'll update it here.

Okay!  This version has been revised and edited for grammar (which I still feel is subjective) and spelling.  Also, some new material has been added in to hopefully make it easier to read and understand.

Well written, my friend.

hey are you gonna make another tootsie flute ficiton? please do i cant get enough of that foal

>>448232448232

I don't have anything planned as of yet but she does reappear in another of my fics.

GUYRA

Also

YOU, BEDROOM. NAOW

Made me lol

Sure hope there's going to be a sequal to this

O.k. so apparently weddings and child birth make me tear-up.

Didn't realise this was here, but I've read it now

goodnight for real this time

Wow. Just wow.

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Am I the only one who wanted to see that carnival mare get an ass whooping??

And Lyra's mum as well!!!

I'm guess your next stories follow on from this one, as the all link to it as the beginning?

>>14560181456018  you are correct.  All of these stories exist in the same timeline.  Happy reading

Your story is beautiful Sir.

I look forward to reading moar.

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Before, I was not onboard with Lyra/BonBon. But after this story:

LYRA/BONBON ALL THE WAY!!!

>>15584441558444  YAY

>>15588811558881 Yeah, I'm currently earring the werepony one. So far so good!

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All credit to TriteBristle

>>17382891738289  I saw this on deviant art as well.

>>17387701738770 Just out of curiosity, did you know that Tootsie Flute actually appears in the show??

>>17400701740070  yes

Whoa-ho-ho! Now that was a well written story. Why did it take me so long to find it?

>>17974671797467  My stories aren't that popular.  I think that's because there are no overt sex scenes or gratuitous gore.  Either way, I enjoy writing them and it makes me happy when others can enjoy them too, even if I don't rise to the level of popularity that "Cupcakes" enjoys.

>>17976171797617

I can't really see why that is. It's a great story. I actually enjoy the fact that you didn't put so much emphasis on the nitty gritty details as you did with the characters dialog and interactions. I think I'm gonna fave this, now that I think about it. And consider yourself watched, now.

>>17976171797617

I can't really see why that is. It's a great story. I actually enjoy the fact that you didn't put so much emphasis on the nitty gritty details as you did with the characters dialog and interactions. I think I'm gonna fave this, now that I think about it. And consider yourself watched, now.

Double post. My bad. Stupid phone.

Awww, how did I miss this? It was so sweet and romantic. Thumbs up! Bravo!

The Doctor must get really frustrated when ponies keep coming to him for medical help.

well Prince of pengiuns on youtube is going to reading your were-pony story soon

i'll see that he mentions that there are other stories by you XD

i found this to be good i read this on ward to Were-pony XD

>>24662582466258  who is this?  DarkShadowsFilms101 did the only reading I know of

his names Princeofpenguins on youtube a Subscriber asked him to read it...

>>24665312466531  sweet

he's a friend and i like your style XD

i might have read another

Bloody adorable. I'm not really one for pregnancy themed fics but this one ... something about it has stuck with me even though I read it a month ago. The trust and love between Bon-Bon and Lyra is poignant and the ending ceaselessly satisfying. Good show!