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Tell me if you make a sequel.

Well are you going to make a sequel to it, also what about Ember, was she in this story too?

9120231
no ember,this is an alt universe after all,and I MIGHT make a sequel,it really depends on if i feel like writing

that's adorable, Bonejaw thinks he's a threat

Hi. Just kind of skimmed over the chapter to see how you wrote about Bonejaw and I've gotta say, you did him justice. Well done my friend.

9124001
thanks,and thank u for the character idea ^W^

9120840
i havn't read a fallout equestria story before,do tell

1. You better f*%@%ing do a sequel!!! That one hell of a cliffhanger.

And

2. You said clip. You ment power cell or magazine if it had bullets.

9164503
hehe i will do one at some point, but not anytime soon

9592529
Maybe,after I wrap up the three stories I have out atm,ones waiting on my co author,lol

9610029
You ansered my question

9164503
I said clip,cause the ponies have no word for energy weapon ammo

9115431
Well, you can tell me in pm now if you want to,may need it,idk yet,lol

9675839
Hahaha! It was supposed to, just know that i really like the story.

9676026
thanks! I wonder what you'll think of the sequel? do tell me what you think of it when you get the chance to do so

9164503
so sorry for the late response, no I said clip because the ponies didn't have a term for their magical powercell ammo yet

9766738
but it takes two minutes to die even with that

9769955 dosent hydrogen come from water and the empier serounded by frozen water

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That was my point.

9781929
indeed! you can read what happens in the next story, a new empire war and peace

This was ok. I felt the pacing was a little fast but other then that it’s alright. Onward to the sequel.

9898170
Old but good.

9898194
You wanna chat on hangouts?

9898203
Wassat? This thread is getting full PM me.

9983880
Okay, the next chapter has this glitch multiple time in the first chapter. If your editor is being lazy, copy and paste this into google sheets, select “Find and Replace” and change “,” to “, “

Please :fluttercry:

10011675
in actuality my editor does not want to reply anymore, and like I've said before, I just don't have the time to edit it myself, if you wish to edit it, be my guest, I'll be glad, when I try to talk to my editor about it they just...don't respond, so idk

10058049
That's awfully late... Nearly 4 months...

Moves a little too fast, and doesnt really have enough detail to be great, but that doesnt mean it isnt still enjoyable. Keep it up. :)

Too fast paced and too little detail to really grab my attention, I had to really try to stay engaged in what I was reading. The premise is interesting though.

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This story was always written for when I was half asleep and black out tired because I refused to sleep *shrug*

Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted Sep 9th, 2020

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What he did to the dragons... are they extinct now?... :pinkiesad2:

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almost, not all of em are dead tho, a good few thousand are left

Comment posted by Shadowflameking deleted Sep 9th, 2020

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Tbh, I'm not sure how to use discord, I'm fairly new to it. :twilightblush: :twilightsheepish:

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