9089412 because I don't want the other kingdoms to try and make there own fatman,and besides the fact the ammo factory mod dosent make fatman mini nukes so he only has a limited supply?
9089494 Or you could have him "Break-Down" after a set amount of time since this world doesn't have the tech required to make him operate continuously.
Not to be rude or anything but I think you should of made the griffin king and the minatour king less nice. Or how about this have them be more greedier or something like there actually holding back tech from each other while actually having better technology back home and they keep on trying to steal each other’s ideas
Sry to me it feels like there not enough Personality to them
9089513 the changelings are part of the empire,and the empire itself has minute men artillery,laser weapons,missile launchers,and combat robots ,im sure it will be well enough defended
9089552 That's kinda of my thing I'm not getting. I always see nobles and royalty as greedy money grubbing lairiers that would do anything as long as it benefits them. And the way you wrote them shows me there not.
I'm sry but it doesn't seem realistic. Did any of them ever break the treaty or even lied about what there showing?
9068731 yes i would like that thanks,just private message me and only luna will give me crap about not giving the empire to cadence,private message me and ill try to work it into the next chapter
Celestia spoke up. "What one of my top weapons makers have come up with is a five shot revolving shotgun that fires the standard brass shotgun shells found in all of our kingdoms, it works just like a revolving rifle but with shorter range and mainly for close combat." The guard took aim at a close wooden target before letting out six shots of lead into the target, blasting it off the face of Equis.
10956495 eh, I did write this while nearly blackout tired every time I wrote for it, cuz thats when I could mostly find the time to write, however it won't matter too much, I'm not going to edit this further than I have already as I plan to do a rewrite where I add more detail, more story, more info, and generally more everything, or at least attempt too, I still think I'm shit at writing lol XD, if interested in the series please pm me for my discord info, you can add me an I can invite ya to the story series discord server
What no Fat man?
Blueblood is still alive?! Awww... I wanted him to die to a Fat Man.
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he might die in later chapter,keep ya horse shoes on
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i never said there wasen't a fatman,if i did then that was an error since i write these things while half asleep most the time
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I meant why didn't he use one here?
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Please make sure he does.
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the rules of the duel was no guns,only melee weapons lol
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And during the "TESTING" with the other nations?
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because I don't want the other kingdoms to try and make there own fatman,and besides the fact the ammo factory mod dosent make fatman mini nukes so he only has a limited supply?
9089414
KK
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so ya like the story so far?
9089418
Could use a LIBERTY PRIME Fallout 3 edition.....Wait can he make one?
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no i hate fo3 liberty prime if i do use it it will be fallout 4 style and no,but maybe the crystal ponies can hehe
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.....But Fo3 is impossible to kill unless you use a kill sat and F04 prime CAN be killed without it
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thats mah point,if i have liberty prime he cant be unkillable
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Or you could have him "Break-Down" after a set amount of time since this world doesn't have the tech required to make him operate continuously.
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i dont think ill have liberty prime in dis story honestly,dont think he would fit
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Or you could have him AND the Fo4 version but use the Fo4 more often and only get the Fo3 out if the Fo4 version cant do it alone
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What about Tirek and changlings attempt no2? Or the "STORM KING"
Not to be rude or anything but I think you should of made the griffin king and the minatour king less nice. Or how about this have them be more greedier or something like there actually holding back tech from each other while actually having better technology back home and they keep on trying to steal each other’s ideas
Sry to me it feels like there not enough Personality to them
9089513
the changelings are part of the empire,and the empire itself has minute men artillery,laser weapons,missile launchers,and combat robots ,im sure it will be well enough defended
9089546
due to the Arms Agreement Treaty they share tech so they are defended against things like the diamond dogs and dragons
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I forgot about that part but still there is Tirek and the storm king
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again,laser and rocket weapons along with long range artillery that EXPLODES upon contact with a target???
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And you cant write a story without him Leaving the empire sometimes. It would be a good idea to be prepared.
Please continue
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That's kinda of my thing I'm not getting. I always see nobles and royalty as greedy money grubbing lairiers that would do anything as long as it benefits them. And the way you wrote them shows me there not.
I'm sry but it doesn't seem realistic. Did any of them ever break the treaty or even lied about what there showing?
9068731
yes i would like that thanks,just private message me and only luna will give me crap about not giving the empire to cadence,private message me and ill try to work it into the next chapter
I saw that type of grenade in a Private Snafu short.
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its a ww2 and a ww1 german stick grenade, so I'd be surprised if you didn't see it before
Bit of a logic mistake
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eh, I did write this while nearly blackout tired every time I wrote for it, cuz thats when I could mostly find the time to write, however it won't matter too much, I'm not going to edit this further than I have already as I plan to do a rewrite where I add more detail, more story, more info, and generally more everything, or at least attempt too, I still think I'm shit at writing lol XD, if interested in the series please pm me for my discord info, you can add me an I can invite ya to the story series discord server
...Isn't Nuka Cola radioactive?
That seems... fairly well like something one should lead with. I mean it's not an issue if you're selling rad-away with it but still.
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Crystal Empire nuka cola is made with local ingredients, aka non irradiated
I just noticed that you didn't use the mixed nuka cola recipes.
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kek XD