9983841 Yeah ik,ik, I was half asleep when I wrote chapters for this story,so ,I just don't have the time to fix it, however I have someone who is supposed to be fixing it
im curious... MC is there for 12 weeks, which means the empire has been there for a while... how's that explain shiny and cadence walking there for a week? so confused
10055798 awhile after lorenzo settled down in the empire and made it his own, cadence and shining armor's trip was delayed getting to the empire to 'save' it from umbra like they did with sombra in the show, so unlike the show they where so late someone else showed up before them an took over
10444141 he is, he left a link to the story, I remember reading that when it came out, sad the author died (I'm assuming their KIA since no being on the site in years)
10531197 lol, good to see people still read this, despite the fact it was trash, I was in the process of editing this, adding more detail, fixing comma issues, etc, but stopped to take a break for a few days
I had made a small Nuka Cola factory, surprising since I had forgotten I installed that mod due to all the crap thats been going on lately, you had to have the Nuka World DLC for it to work, and the recipes for the drinks in said DLC, but so long as it had glass, metal, and the ingredients needed to make the many flavors of cola, it would continue to make all flavors until it ran out. Everything was looking good for the Empire, nothing could go wrong now, ....I feel like Murphy is gonna bitch slap me for thinking that.
I swear if candence decides to try hurting the changlings in the empire then this just confirms it’s a Nigel M Chalmers story by dropbear but rushed, semi anthro, genderbent umbra (doesn’t matter she’s dead), and with fallout being the main point.
I’m fine with this since dropbear disappeared and the sequel is unfinished.
Everything was looking good for the Empire, nothing could go wrong now, ....I feel like Murphy is gonna bitch slap me for thinking that.
Meanwhile in the icy tundra twenty miles from the Crystal Empire.
Cadence was staring at the blue barrier with shock and confusion. "Shining, why is the barrier up? It makes no sense for Queen Umbra to have activated the crystal heart." Her ice blue eyes staring out to the barrier that shouldn't have existed.
Shining armor shrugged. "I dunno Cady, but let's hope the crystal ponies can survive another day before we get there." Shining pulled his cloak closer to him, there chariot had crashed about a week ago, delaying their mission to save the Crystal Empire, but one way or another, they were gonna save the Empire.
it is good
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Thanks
Pretty good, but you need a space after EVERY SINGLE COMMA! So yeah, I’ll keep reading
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Yeah ik,ik, I was half asleep when I wrote chapters for this story,so ,I just don't have the time to fix it, however I have someone who is supposed to be fixing it
im curious... MC is there for 12 weeks, which means the empire has been there for a while... how's that explain shiny and cadence walking there for a week? so confused
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awhile after lorenzo settled down in the empire and made it his own, cadence and shining armor's trip was delayed getting to the empire to 'save' it from umbra like they did with sombra in the show, so unlike the show they where so late someone else showed up before them an took over
Pretty damn good, I see you fixed things up and all, I shall continue to reread this peice of art
Chatter...has flashbacks of one loud murderous space marine who took over the empire using a table leg...
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what? As far as I know Lorenzo hasn't used a table leg to kill someone
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I think I know who you are talking about. A mad man from U.I.P right
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he is, he left a link to the story, I remember reading that when it came out, sad the author died (I'm assuming their KIA since no being on the site in years)
Preston Garvey is gonna apear out of nowhere and be like:Another settlement need your help ibe alredy makred it.
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not likely, also if you enjoy the story series so far, pm me an I'll invite ya to the discord server
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"General. I've got word of another settlement that needs our help".
Me: *Having exterminated the raiders and mutants on a genocidal level*. THAT'S BULLSHIT AND YOU KNOW IT!
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lol, good to see people still read this, despite the fact it was trash, I was in the process of editing this, adding more detail, fixing comma issues, etc, but stopped to take a break for a few days
lol
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glad to see you enjoy the series! Pm me for a link to the discord server for this series
I swear if candence decides to try hurting the changlings in the empire then this just confirms it’s a Nigel M Chalmers story by dropbear but rushed, semi anthro, genderbent umbra (doesn’t matter she’s dead), and with fallout being the main point.
I’m fine with this since dropbear disappeared and the sequel is unfinished.
The story I’m talking about: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/150413/nigel-m-chalmers-emperor
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Same
And cue the massacre, to lambs of the slaughter
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well henlo dere