"...what did I just even read." - Wintermist || "Pour la beauté du geste" || ooo || π
In a rather ordinary looking palace of the capital Twilight brings back the results of her latest mission. 01010100 01101000 01101001 01110011 00100000 01101001 01110011 00100000 01101010 01110101 01110011 01110100 00100000 01110100 01101000 01100101 00100000 01100010 01100101 01100111 01101001 01101110 01101110 01101001 01101110 01100111 00101110
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Huh
Very Interesting!
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Well that explained absolutely nothing. Or even did a little bit of world builidng outside of something for Twilight. Come on gives us more.
I can'y give any kind of vote without something more to work with.
This is just the beginning.huh ok im intrested il bite
Curious
I think this would sound better if it went:
Otherwise it sounds as if the room's wall has "a tired look on her face". (Don't worry; I make mistakes like that all the time. XD) Sorry, that's just a little thing I noticed and thought you might appreciate a small bit of criticism. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story! It was a very interesting idea, and I enjoyed reading it. ^^ It was really well written, too. Great job!
On an unrelated note, this is the first story that I've read on this site in over a year, wow. It was worth my time.I'd like more.
With a side of context. You've a good basis for a story here.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Where's the story?
Even as a short it felt like it was missing some key part. I don't see how any of it fits together, and there's so little to go on that I can't even guess at it.
well this made me incredebly curious as to the rest of this world.
this is...odd...i feel like im missing something...twilight didnt even give the poor automaton a chance really
i get the feelng twilight is a bit unhinged in this, whats more did she blow the thing up or did it self destruct on its own due to something...
so many questions
I feel like this needs more explanation, cause it feels like it’s half finished. But I have to say it was still good anyway
That's a lot of words to say barely anything
Interesting but your probably should've expanded the story more as we didn't understand the world or the context of what's happening till the end.