Semi-sequel to The Last Sparkle Before the Night. Reading not required.
Twilight Sparkle died. She died saving everypony from the changelings, slaying each and every one of them with a single spell. The results?
Regrets. Pain, suffering. No chance to say goodbye, no chance for anypony to say sorry. She left behind betrayals not forgiven, and not one pony was left unburdened by her sudden passing.
There is no such thing as a second chance. Unless something special happens.
After all; Death has its servants as well. And with somepony as special as Twilight Sparkle, perhaps it might see its way to asking for her services.
Death pays well, but asks for everything. Can Twilight find her chance, or will she turn into nothing more than a pawn of the end?
has a sequel: Once More, With Feeling
Ok, I am interested to see where this goes.
There's always more to lose even more in death Twilight.
yeah deaths going to make her reap the souls of those she loves
Don't be so sure Twilight. Time changes a pony and what you may find may not be pleasant or wanted.
Why, oh why, did you invoke Murphy, Twilight!
You really should link to that story.
Itty-bitty nitpick: "Changeing" is spelled incorrectly. It's "Changing".
I despise the fact that I can't seem to cry.
P.S. I also added this to Buried Treasures and the Underappreciated Story Society.
I did not enjoy this as much as it's "prequel" but I only started this series because of my initial interest in this story's sequel so it's fine.
Very suspicious offer, very interesting take on the afterlife.
Wow. Things are never as we envision them.
Well, this is a whole different bushel of apples. Every turn renews my interest.
A heavy price for something so little and yet.
Vital
So sad.
Of course you shouldn't take offers from unknown person.
Wow, cream brulée.
Killing Zecora was excessive.
So now the adventures of Twilight Sparkle as the Ghost Rider. Nice, a few nitpicks though: Dif Twi forgot she can ise magic and has no need for death to do anything for her? Is shr forgetting that the use of the elements will likely gix her body for her (ig dhe is still a bearer off course)? Ehy didn't she contacy Celestia first of all? (This is S3 Tei and she was a "Celestia can solve anything" type of mare at that time).
All in all the premise has a lot of holes but otherwise pretty fun.
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People don't change.
Solid 8/10