You needed someone to teach you how to not suck at Generosity. Namely fashion design. You managed to find one in the surprisingly tall school girl Yona. She naturally accepts the offer to tutor you and tutor she does... At least until it becomes the dead of winter night with the heat off. Though Yona has a secret trick up her sleeve, for you see...
Yaks best at hugs.
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Not bad. The writing is honestly a little too simple, but it was a nice story.
I hope yaks best at spinal reconstruction
Second person P.O.V. is weird as fuck, otherwise pretty nice.
Awesome!
cute
Cute
It’s a very nice story and I do like it. But, I felt the fun felt simple and too quick to end. I would’ve loved if you could prolong and detail the sleepover a little more. Perhaps some more interaction between “You” and Yona could make this better.
Then again, if you are planning a sequel, then this will be reasonable. Other than that, cute story! Nice job!
Make a second chapter, it's pretty good