Twilight Sparkle has quite a few amazing adventures when she was young and had a lot of friends contrary to popular belief... Only they weren't ponies. In this story, I strive to write the world in my head, and I hope you guys enjoy the ride.
Changeling hype and secret heirs aside, let's get into it.
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This is good can't wait for more
Nice update
following and waiting for next update!
keep it up!
Yes this is nice
Thank you all! I hope we have fun in my first ride in Fimfiction!
I do to I have read ones like this were twilight has a changling friend and this is a good one can't wait to see were this goes
CAKE PROBATION!
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Twily's pure evil incarnate!
Oh my frigg im sorry it took so long damn school and writers block and shitty writing so i had to replan the story im so sorry pls forgive me im just 14 years old amateur writer sorry again this is making me so stressed i forgot proper grammar
Yeah update and it wax good thx
*That simple sentence from manacar fills me with DETERMINATION
Interesting, you've caught my eye
look like good story but I wonder how did they all get together in the first place
Hope your ok and still working on this awesome story
Hope this is not dead would be a waste of a great story just like your story would be
Please tell me this isn’t dead, pleeeeease! This way too interesting!
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Where did it go?
Im shook...i-..bruh..i didnt know..you were bisya...👁️👄👁️
OOOOOOooooooo...............like how this is going
So good
This was so good!
Why it is dead now?
So....can I adopt this story or...
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do it!
It is a dead story with a dead author.
Besides I want where it would go.
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Huh...didn't think anyone would respond.
If I were to continue this story, may I ask a few details?
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I'm not the author but ok...
I like reading interesting books twice...
ok, maybe not twice...
ten times.... per year.....
And I have 52 favorites not counting tracking
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Nothing much.
Just wanna know details about the characters. I only know about Twi and Spike.
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ok
do you need every bit of detail about the characters of this story now or I can sent it later?
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Gaion- son of the Twilight Sparkle named Jason Sparkle, known in the Unity Squad as Brute: He had been hiding in the Caves of Canterlot before when he grew bigger than a raptor, but when he heard his mother was transferred to Ponyville, he was there by midnight, startling the frick out of his mother and brother.
He then marked the entire Everfree as his territory, thus making him the top of the foodchain. It gave him the authority to order the other massive beasts around, since he was technically unkillable.
Gaions desciption:These creatures are massive and strong, almost like the dinosaur T-rex. The only difference was this beast was entirely made of bones. Only animated by their mother's magic, as they were born dead. They are indestructable, nearly impossible to take down. They have teeth as sharp as swords, jaws strong enough to crumple titanium, eyes that can see through the dark, and a tail that can morph into any bladed weapon.
it's ability to radiate emotion.
All ponies and creatures alike that are in its radius immediately feel and act upon the emotion it is giving out.
Gaions were dangerous, and even as the Princesses drove them away, as they cannot really kill them, smaller Gaions were seen now and then and seeing one was a big deal.
No one has ever defeated a Gaion before, as they are only defeated truly if they are to be dissolved into pure emotion, absorbed into one's heart, and overcome that strong feeling.
They have their own language.
Twilight Sparkle- adopted sister of Shining Armor. She is the leader and the brain of the Unity Squad known as the Magi. Her unique eyes: black of the pupils replaced with a swirling galaxy, and the pupils turned into a crescent moon and star.
Mother of Jason Sparkle and Spike Sparkle, Queen of the hive in the Everfree Forest and good friend/mare friend with Prince.
Probability currently only in hypothesis: Daughter of the Celestia(story belonged to group Momcelesta), adopted by Shining's family,
not known: how Jason was born.
Prince- King Metamorphosis, son of Queen Chrysalis, works with Twilight from the very beginning, they don't have any secrets between them. He is the second leader of the Unity Squad known as Striker. He together with Twilight are rulers of the Hive of the Everfree, made of exiled changelings.
Spike- In the Unity Squad known as All-around. Son of the Twilight Sparkle
April- Spy in the Unity Squad. She is a purple pegasus in disguise normally changeling with no information in the text. She really is in games and
All of the Unity Squad were raised inside Canterlot Castle, probably under watchful eyes of Celestia(chapter Commander Alchemy). They all have some extra abilities. Often seen in small towns helping others.
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Nice.
Though I re-read Commander Alchemy. I don't think Celestia knows.
Thanks for the details though
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np.
When you finish writing message me. I really want to read it.
Really enjoyed the story, can't wait for the rest of it.