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This story is a sequel to 404: Romance Not Found

Twilight buys Rarity the perfect gift to celebrate their relationship.

Too bad it's cursed.
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Complete Published: Jun 18th, 2018 Download
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Darkstarling
Darkstarling #1 · Jun 18th, 2018 · · ·
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Fun story, good speech by Twilight about why it reminds her of Rarity, even if we got it twice.

The best way to deal with a ghost is ALWAYS counciling.

Ri2
Ri2 #2 · Jun 18th, 2018 · · ·
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So, can Twilight get her money back? I mean, the store owner was selling her a super cursed gemstone. That's gotta be mega illegal.

FanOfMostEverything
FanOfMostEverything #3 · Jun 18th, 2018 · · ·
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Mono confirmed to emit Raritwi radiation. I recommend lead shielding.

In all seriousness, lovely story. Not my preferred pairing, but still a wonderfully engaging read.

Blue_Paladin42
Blue_Paladin42 #4 · Jun 18th, 2018 · · ·
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8993208
It's too late. We are all contaminated. Best to just let it happen. :pinkiecrazy:

Knight N Gale
Knight N Gale #5 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·
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I loved it, but I honestly think it was short and somewhat fast paced. I guess that's to be expected seeing as the the first story was so much longer.

I think you should expand upon this more. Maybe write a full fledged sequel that's as long if not longer than the first story

Dustcan
Dustcan #6 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·
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Kinda good but...is that it?

livinthelife
livinthelife #7 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·
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The old man waggled his fingers, eyes twinkling. “It is a special stone, they say. One blessed with the spirits of good fortune. Normally, I would be cutting my own throat just to sell it to you for fifteen-hundred. But I can tell, you mean to give that stone to someone extraordinarily special. For you, I can sell it for eight hundred.”

Go back to Ankh-Morpork, Dibbler. Leave the pony girls alone.

lazyreader19
lazyreader19 #8 · Jun 24th, 2018 · · ·
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Hhnnnnngggg, I loved it! :heart:

Also hubba hubba, RariTwi in the tubba :raritywink:

MrAskAPirate
MrAskAPirate #9 · Jun 25th, 2018 · · ·
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One of these days you’re going to get your brother a toaster for a wedding present and it’s going to grow arms and legs and start assaulting the guests with burnt toast.

No, no, no, no, we put a warning label on it, we don't have any liability- aggh! Ow! Oh! :twilightoops:

Purple-Smart Heart
Purple-Smart Heart #10 · Jul 1st, 2018 · · ·
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why not more Raritwi?

All ship-fic authors should really ask themselves this question frequently :moustache:

Cerulean Blue
Cerulean Blue #11 · Jul 22nd, 2018 · · ·
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This is incredible Raritwi :)

Luna Aeterna Solutae
Luna Aeterna Solutae #12 · Aug 27th, 2018 · · ·
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Normally, I would be cutting my own throat just to sell it to you for fifteen-hundred.

You motherfucker.
8993192
I highly suspect that if they returned to that location, the shop would no longer be there.

n3k1dsk1llz
n3k1dsk1llz #13 · Sep 5th, 2018 · · ·
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This little story is great. I love seeing uncommon ships done well.

Lore Horse
Lore Horse #14 · Jun 25th, 2019 · · ·
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9134894
It wouldn't surprise me if there was a box on the ground where the shop once was and it contains the $800 that Twilight paid for it. :trollestia:

Posh
Posh #15 · Jul 2nd, 2019 · · ·
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Applejack shook her head, smiling. “The saying I’m trying to get at here is ‘Honesty is always the best policy.’.

Extra period. Also, I think the POV shift was abrupt and hard to follow.

Other than that, this was

c o u n t r y
l i c k i n g
g o o d

as was the rest of twilight and rarity's evening, I'm sure

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #16 · Dec 19th, 2023 · · ·
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Bright light ripped through Rarity’s vision, then her sense of her body went limp, like a puppet with its strings cut. She floated, numbly staring out of her own eyes.

Uh oh! :twilightoops:

Twilight lashed out with her magic, purple light enveloping Rarity and throwing her back and up, pinning her against the ceiling.

Shouldn't have bought it Twilight. :ajbemused:

Rarity felt her body go limp, all the fight drained out of it, still hung in Twilight’s magic. “ That was all I ever wanted for her.” Jazzar mumbled. “ If she could achieve happiness, than I suppose that is a form of bliss. But is it really? I wanted to share in that joy, that life, with her, and live by her side in the end. But it seems as if I did not deserve it.”

At least she got her wish still. :fluttershysad:

Of all the things Rarity had expected to be doing today, talking an angry ghost through an existential crisis was pretty low on the list. Although considering the general magical turmoil that disrupted their lives every so often, it still had a place on the list to begin with. “ There’s no such thing as ‘deserve’ in love. I cannot speak for Somnambula, of course, but if she felt the same way about you, then I’m sure she shared your dreams for the future, and would’ve been happy living by your side. I wonder if I deserve Twilight sometimes. But all I can do—all you, or anyone else can do, is to try their best to be the best version of themselves that they can be.”

Exactly! :rainbowdetermined2:

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