Heartbeat

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Equestria Girls
Romance
Drama
In need of help in preparing for her date, Twilight asked for assistance from Rarity and Sunny Flare.
Sunset Shimmer
Rarity (EqG)
Sunny Flare
Sci-Twi
Filipino_Gal7787 · 2k words · 53 4 · 3k views

Sunset's has had feelings for the human world's Twilight Sparkle. She desperately wants to ask her out, the only problem is that she doesn't know how to.

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Emerald Harp

Emerald Harp #1 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

I really liked this fic. It was short, sweet, and well written. Well done.

dlazerous

dlazerous #2 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

Drat, i seem to have read these out of order. Good job, a little short for my taste but as first attempts go, well done.

Filipino_Gal7787

Filipino_Gal7787 #3 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

8494816
Thanks! Sorry it's short though

Filipino_Gal7787

Filipino_Gal7787 #4 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

8494716
Thank you!

Chrome Reader

Chrome Reader #5 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

I, who likes reading wattpad from time to time, gotta say this is good fic

And as a fellow citizen, nice job

Cheer

Cheer #6 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

suuuuuper cheesy. But super cute

Filipino_Gal7787

Filipino_Gal7787 #7 · Oct 18th, 2017 · · ·

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they are teenagers so chessy is right up their alley.

mycarhasaMoustache

mycarhasaMoustache #8 · Jul 21st, 2018 · · ·

Adorable and straight to the action. Love it.

MistyShadowz

MistyShadowz #9 · May 3rd, 2022 · · ·

the only problem is that she doesn't know how to.

Yes, because to fix such a love problem you MUST go to Rainbow Dash and Applejack; the least lovey-covey characters in the entire show. Right, Sunset, I think you kinda messed up on this one. That song was cheesy as heck, and I doubt it would have gone past Rainbow's sap detection, and no way would Aj make you sing something so cheesy. Why in the name of everything that is right in this world did Sunset choose to go to Rainbow? And why did Rainbow decide that, yes, her best friend, Applejack, the one who knows even less about love than she does, would be the perfect person to help Sunset? It legit surprises me that SciI-Twi even said yes. Honestly, I wouldn’t, but that’s just me…

The ScieSet was cool though, it felt generic and boring, but nothing really wrong with it. I wish you actually did something with the mentions of Applejack and Rainbow, they felt like props, throw-away props at that! Like, get rid of them, and what changes? Nothing!
Any who.
That’s me ranting a little…
Decent concept, disappointing execution.

AppleJackAdmirer