"Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent" - Victor Hugo
Ever since Camp Everfree, Twilight has been asking herself the same question every night: how does one ask out Sunset Shimmer?
Normally she turns to science, but science can't help when emotion starts to override everything she does.
Inspired by the story The Sunlight Project by Space Jazz, a story I highly recommend. Also, this is my first story on this site, so all constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated.
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Oh twilight tryimg to bring a book lol. Is it the same one ur counter part used om her frist sleep over lol.
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What book? I don't have that book that I don't know you're talking about
The start.
Twilight can't hide from Sunset.
What's the project?!?!?
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All will be revealed soon enough
Ooooooo! Sunsets powers r incersing! And aww poor twi. I hope sunset really likes her not just becase the empathy messing with her.
Something tells me things will get interesting. I personally think Sunset is an orphan. It makes all her decisions make sense. And the only line about her family "not close". Is also something orphans say to avoid the subject. But that's my headcanon i suppose. Biologically or by adoption i see Celestia as her mother.
I understand Sunset. She wants Celestia to reach out first. Not through Twilight. But personally. Until then she thinks she is still banished and won't go back
Ooo i love midnights description! Super cute and unice. Hope sunsets not to mad. But then again i lov her anger issues makes her feel real.
Oh Bucko!
You know, I'm not sure I've seen Sunset being quite that keen on leaving all of her past behind her in other stories before, but I can kinda see where she's coming from. I'm interested to see where all this ends up going
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Part of the inspiration was the Forgotten Friendship special that just aired, showing just how afraid Sunset is of people viewing her that way. I personally think it makes sense that she'd want to leave behind a part of herself that was capable of doing so much worse than her human self, and it also explains why she seems so dedicated to making a life in the alternate world
are you going to do a continuity? Know that you have a reader assured if your subsequent stories are like this here!
is a quote from Nightmare Before Christmas? I ask you because being Italian the film I did not see it in English but the words seeming those of Jack's song when he discovers the city of Christmas. And I have to assume that you did not put it by accident, right?
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Yes, this will be a continuity, and thank you very much for sticking with it. Right now I'm caught between between a follow-up story studying the portal's escaping magic, and a story focusing on another pair.
That is indeed a reference to A Nightmare Before Christmas, with the lyrics altered slightly to fit as a hint towards a future story.
havign sunset call her twily is kinda creepy to be honest as that is what her brother calls her
still good story and i enjoyed it
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Sunset doesn't know that.
Excellent job on your first story, I really enjoyed it!
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Thank you very much!
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i know im just saying
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It won't stick around, Sunset will have a new nickname for her after their visit to Equestria
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So, how did Twilight manage to have two first kisses? Time travel? Clones? Wouldn't put either one past her.
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oops, that'll be fixed
I really, really like this!
Looking forward to your continuity.
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Thank you!
Very nice. A trifle rushed at times but everything flowed nicely.
This is good. ONWARD TO CHAPTER 2
This is great. It deserves way more attention than its getting.
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While more attention would certainly be appreciated, I'm perfectly happy with the pace things have been going. I only started writing stories a month ago, and the fact that I'm nearing 1,000 views across all my stories so soon is beyond what I ever imagined. The compliment is appreciated all the same, and I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it so far
You could probably nix the “would be” here.
The map is obviously vague, but it seems like Sunset lives in a apartment/flat/condo/studio-loft-thing rather than a house, but that’s me being nit picky.
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I'll be honest, I wasn't aware she had a canon home. Thank you for pointing that out, as well as your previous comment. Both will be edited ASAP
Excelente comienzo, me gustó mucho!
Oh s*** she's in trouble
A hand? More like a hoof
It is quietly silly imo but when you really think about it isn't.
Oofity.
At least we know s I tie is living alone with just herself and spike.
Yep, you can say that again.
Damn it twilight you blew your 1 moment.
She's right, sometimes you have to figure it out the hard way.
I really don't think you should do that twilight, sunset will understand.
Better explain it to her before things likely will get worst.
Sometimes your thoughts end up differently.
At least we know sunset meant it.
Well at least I know what bureau means/is.
Busted.
But she at least got her wish granted.
Not to mention she'll be pissed as well.
Yeah I agree.
I hope sci twi doesn't regret it later.
For a second there I thought it was a sign of the short "overpowered" coming up.
Yep since she'll have quite the freakout on what sci twi did.
Uh oh!
You can say that again.
Hopefully things will turn out good eventually.
Been there, there have been many things in my past I want to forget, some of which I can't for certain reasons.
I have a feeling their friends heard her say girlfriend.
Hopefully that kissed helped brighten up Sunset's mood right now. 🤞
This is already giving me tears of my own right now
And they were.
Looks like fluttershy has feelings for rainbow dash, how am I not surprised.
This story was way better than I thought it would be and I'm glad I read it.