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Authora97


Writer of The Day My Life Ended. Always working on my next story. Spotty with updates.

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This story is a sequel to The Lonely Path to Dawn


Raspberry has a headache.
And no, that headache isn't called 'Twilight Sparkle'
It's worse.
Like, a lot worse.
With side effects nopony could've guessed.

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Comments ( 1 )

I like what you did with the episode in general however I feel like I'm missing why the headache happened. It wasn't the protection against the spell, so was it her being called to the human world by her magic and her resisting it?

Also especially the second half is heavily garnished with typos. Maybe give it a lookover?

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