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Citrus Recluse


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I wish you did an alternative bad ending where Twilight and Starlight failed to rescue them and to continue infecting and also it would be nice if there was a male infection too via vaginal

Overall pretty good

In Soviet Equestria, shrooms do you.

Ah. This must be in Soviet Equestria.:ajbemused:

Oh man, this hit a lot of buttons for me.

Very enjoyable :twilightsmile:

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Well, the author's note at the end of the first chapter did mention that an alternative bad ending is in the works. I can't wait for it... :rainbowwild:

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You know, I don't get why Soviet Russia jokes are still a thing when if any country is doing things totally backwards, it's the United States.

Really? After all that, Septa forgets that unicorns can move things with their magic? Really? Damn that Shroom is stupid.

This is incomplete, right?

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Actually, no, not any more. Thank for you catching that;
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There's been a change of plans; rather than having a bad ending for this story, what I'm doing to instead is a sequel, and then that will have a bad ending.

timing is off. Dash shouldn't take that long to catch up. think you need to rework that timing.

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1) I don't take orders from you.

2) Rainbow Dash moves at the speed of plot.

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it's called constructive critizism. ment to improve a story.

I hate that the mushrooms never win (seriously)

inside Fluttershy's clit

I wasn't aware we were getting THIS fetish in this story.
Wonderful error in word choice.

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Simple typo. Should say "slit." Fixed now.

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I know, I was just having a bit of a laugh.

Why are these kinda stories so hard to find. Good job can't wait to read more

I love it. Shame it's just 2 chapters long though.

Mushroom transformation is a favorite of mine, but it's quite rare.

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You may be happy to hear there is a sequel, which will be 4 chapters and which just has the first one out today.

*cough* and I do commissions, so if you had some spare change, I could make it so there's more mushrooms in your future. Just sayin'. :P

No Starlight! Did you not learn anything from The Cutie Map?

Zecora turned and marched away from the alraune. She was going to go to Ponyville and get Twilight Sparkle and her friends to come and help her with this fight.

Zecora wrapped her hands around the stalk and pushed the tendril in further.

unusual for Fluttershy to go into the Forest for rare herbs,

What was she doing?

Septa made it seem so natural,

wearing clothes instead of showing off her

she lives in this big castle made out of a crystal tree."

still not noticing as the fungal growth crept closer and closer to her crotch.

She swayed back and forth, her consciousness losing focus.

even if it makes it a little annoying for me.

began to work on getting out of Fluttershy's by grabbing Fluttershy's wrist.

to her by the both the milk and the tentacle.

anticipation as the bulge traveled down the length of the tentacle

inserted its tip into her mouth.

when the tentacle in her ass reached its peak,

She would take in as much of it as she could, because that was what she was supposed to do, because it

best friends made the taste all the more sweeter to Fluttershy.

The tentacles, spent, at least for now,

determined it was some sort of large tentacle or tail or some similar appendage.

Edit 11/5/2018:

Twilight and Starlight looked on with fear and anxiety

and I think we both know that's going to happen from these positions."

Do you mean not?

She gasped when she saw the hole the unicorns put there.

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