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Huh. Been awhile since I last read something that gets pretty much every part of the female anatomy wrong. I laughed so hard at the eggs part, good one!
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If it's anthro, then the cervical penetration is theoretically legit because horses. Oops?
happy April fools day :3
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Cervical penertation is one thing, but all that nonsense about the cock slamming the eggs into her cervix is a pretty clear indicator this writer has no idea what the cervix is and where it’s located. Or how conception works, given how the eggs just instantaneously roll out into the womb like pinballs. Conception happens in the tubes before they even reach the womb, and they hang out there for days. And there is all that precum that magically makes a female ready to reproduce, and all the other stuff about alphas and whatnot, but I’m overlooking those since they’re clearly just kinks.
Oh and dang, I didn’t even realize earlier how the eggs are determined to be female before conception! That is literally impossible, since it’s the sperm that decides the sex of the baby.
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It is nice to see that you were entertained, even if it was different from how I intended it to be.
Now to the meat of the matter. I would refute the statement that I have no idea about female anatomy. Is it very unrealistic? Yup. And I do own that fact. My friends don't see a problem with that either (and one of them is a woman). This is just for fun. Very unrealistic, yes, but also very kinky. Porn does tend to be unrealistic. This is simply more so than other porn that might be tamer. So I think it is fine. I wouldn't change it and there will be enough people that like it because of that extreme kinkyness this fic excudes.
Regardless of that, the fic still worked for you as well seeing as you had fun and in the end that is all that matters. I am here to entertain people, so I am glad to publish something that works out.
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Well I was entertained by the sheer amount of nonsense. Thanks for that!
So you do know what and where the cervix is and such? You just chose not to include that kind of knowledge in this? Coolbeans! I do not personally find the kind of porn hot where none of the anatomical aspects are correct or realistic in the slightest, but if that floats your boat, go for it! I mean, I guess I or someone else could write a fic where females emit pheromones that make men want to push their balls up their own bums and they pass one of their testicles through the johnson when their climax, and someone would like it (as in kinky like). That would also make me laugh
It was great and entertaining towan, although I have doubts if you will do a fic with Rainbow in the future? I was left wanting to see more of this RD.
Yet Spike still became sluttier than all of them.
It's a free buffet for changelings. I wonder how the other princesses are doing?
Then Twilight makes a completely serious article on it to help out Rainbow Dash:
(2) So I wrote a research paper to prove whether or not anime titties are aerodynamic (using Lucoa)... : anime (reddit.com)
Which changes the wonderbolts forever.
You should totally write a story about what happened with Scootaloo. You can post it on AO3.
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Why is that?
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Because I would like to read it. Obviously. Is that even a question?
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Well, I never read this story firstly. And second, I read your comment. And I also want to know what happened to Scootaloo?
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Read the story, then. Why would you respond to a comment on a story you haven't read, yet?
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I usually do that to some other stories anyway, because I'm not into that particular story, and just want to comment for the heck of it.
Gotta love the comments ranting about female anatomy on what's essentially a hentai fic. We're here for sex, not anatomical correctness. Fap or fuck off people.
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I agree. It would be fun to see anthro scoots learn a hard wonder bolt session.
Would love too see a sequel with Scoots wonder bolt "adventure" explored.
will there ver be any sequels 2 (a curious case of a yak turned bimbo)??? with ocellus, smolder, & silverstream???
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Wrong story to ask, seeing as this is not the story you mentioned. There is no sequel planned for now. It is a commission and as such will only be continued if it is commissioned.
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As they say, Fantasy, is not reality, but fantasy, is whatever we want it to be. Good work. 🍷