I have absolutely no idea why you’re getting so many downvotes on this. These stories are extremely well written and the love and passion depicted are so genuine. Keep doing what you’re doing!

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Idk either but I plan on continuing to write these anyway, at least for each of the pairings on the cover. Thanks so much for the support. :D

As long as you’re willing to learn to apple buck, haha.

Here we have the apple family who keep looking for slave and hide it in a joke.
Seriously no matter how good of a trade that may be, you can't live there anymore without being forced to hit a tree one way or another.

good I'm a bit in that chapter already and I'm already glad granny smith didn't just assumed love being in the air between those two out of nowhere.

edit: till tomorrow I'm going to update this comment instead of making several again just because I decited to stop in the middle again.

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I guess I'm really bored at the moment, nothing really reals good enough right now.
Not sure if it quite works out with them getting together in only one chapter, some of them like Twilight and Sunset maybe know each other long enough (they have that book right?), but the others are more or less just latching onto each other. Then again, this time it would only be those two that mostly only met as kids and I just remembered Rainbow had a background thing going on with Night Glider.

I think Applejack started out with bein my favourite even if Fluttershy had drawn me to the show first, but I think the show and mostly stories had somehow ruined that for me.

Winter Wrap-Up came and went, and Rara was a huge help in getting crops planted. Though ever since Twilight first started organizing it, the event has gone off without a hitch. With the arrival of spring, Rara began her camp.

aahhh okay you use timeskips for this one, well I hate timeskips, but since I know what you planned for this story or how it is supposed to work out it's fine.

With the arrival of spring, Rara began her camp.

have the cutie mark Crussaiders stopped their own camp?, or sold their camp to Rara?

Hhhmmm instead of watching or something he should have probably spared them the embrassment and trying to wake them by knocking on the barn door or something first.

Well...i think the chapter was alright but I like the one with Rainbow more, of course my mood plays a role to, but I had the thought that this wasn't that interessting to me, not sure if the shipping was to common even if acceptable or if the environment was to common.
It was something more calm/slow and nice I guess, could be because of the timeskips too.

I can't always pinpoint it even if I keep trying to do exactly that.