So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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I’m sure he’ll get further than he thinks that he will. He just needs to remember that he has a tiny bit of Discord’s own power and then use a little imagination.
I can think of someone else who can save the world so long as he uses a little imagination. Can the rest of you?
Well it probably didn't sink in that his first death has brought about the end of that first world I wonder if he if he will just fail or flunk as that last possible moment where he was about to saved it but made a stupid mistake at the last possible moment.
con esta frase comenzamos esta aventura y por lo de rarity (con lo que paso de rarity discordada, mas vale no meterse con ella. recuerden que le paso a . le dio una paliza a applejack)
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en realidad, mi interés volvió a subir por el nuevo mundo. esto será asombroso.
is really very interesting the current reality in which Salvatore is. the story just arrived, it is not hurried and you feel that it will give long term, even so, you have in mind that the character will do everything possible to save that world (as a character, not an author. they work) good work with the chapter and try to maintain humanity.
Rarity kidnapped by slave merchants (or only slave owners)? Who would say that this is where his generosity took her? (It reminds me a little of the virtue of lil 'pip "sacrifice" which is another form of generosity to the point of giving everything.)
if they tell you that this is not grim, remember that you are aiming for a good job and they have not seen this probably since the beginning of the fandom (was not there a version of the history of the "blanks" in which there is a human? that you can see the grim and it's a HiE.)
try to keep them for the healing of the mind and soul.
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uhhhh
ok then
yeah I will assume that what you said in spanish is the same as the english paragraphs
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with this sentence we start this adventureandfor the reason of rarity (with what happened of discordant rarity, it is better not to mess with her.) remember that I happened to ...gave him a beating to applejack)
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Actually, my interest went back up the new world.this will be amazing.
is really very interesting the current reality in which Salvatore is. the story just arrived, it is not hurried and you feel that it will give long term, even so, you have in mind that the character will do everything possible to save that world (as a character, not an author. they work) good work with the chapter and try to maintain humanity.
Rarity kidnapped by slave merchants (or only slave owners)? Who would say that this is where his generosity took her? (It reminds me a little of the virtue of lil 'pip "sacrifice" which is another form of generosity to the point of giving everything.)
if they tell you that this is not grim, remember that you are aiming for a good job and they have not seen this probably since the beginning of the fandom (was not there a version of the history of the "blanks" in which there is a human? that you can see the grim and it's a HiE.)
try to keep them for the healing of the mind and soul.
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the true meaning is lost in translation
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oh ok thank you
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Oh hell, yeah! new chapter to the awakening of my nap.
I leave useful images in PM
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by Discord
instead of Pinkie.
PTSD is a bear. Have fun, Doomedguy.
Does this story have an actual plot with character development and everything or is it just a long series of semi-connected one-shots? I'm asking because I'm not certain how you could write a story like this and have any meaningful characters or plot as the entire universe would get destroyed every time the protagonist dies, which is bound to happen a lot, and given that he's likely to go to a bunch of different universes, you'd end up having to either destroy the universe he's currently in or fix its problem every few chapters, which doesn't lend itself much to a riveting plot if everything is rushed.
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If I have my guess the first death was sort of to affirm the dark situation rather than set a precedent. He now has the death of a universe hanging over him and the knowledge that it totally actually happens.
Does anyone know if Discord set some time limit for each dimension/reality? I do not see why Salvatore must hurry at full speed to save a reality.
"the7Saviors" Do not worry, there will be opinions or hasty comments. Many of us can see the potential of this story, it will be something interesting and entertaining, there is no doubt about that. look at those thumbs up there in so little time, this story is good and you do not need to rush things. Take them calmly and at your own pace.
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I appreciate the encouragement.
And to answer your question, no there is no set time limit... at the moment. That may or may not change later, but at this point anything can happen so we'll see.
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The one thing I hold above all else when writing or reading a story is character development. Character interaction and characterization comes right after that. There is most definitely going to be an overarching plot, you don't have to worry about that. Expect to see multiple chapters taking place in one universe because it's going to happen often.
I'm torn. I want to see more chapters of this as soon as possible, but I don't want the author to burn out and lose interest in this story.
Great story by the way.
I really like the idea that you've come up with, and I really don't want to wait to see more.
I get it's not exactly what you're going for, but I think this needs the Comedy tag? I can tell you're planning to take the grimdark seriously, but at the same time the very concept is kind of a satire of grimdark MLP fics. (Honestly, if these universes are anything like a lot of the fanfics on this site, he could probably fix some of them just by pointing out blindingly obvious facts to certain ponies.) Plus the narrator is very snarky.
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Believe or not, I actually did consider it, but I think I'll hold off for now until there's more story to work with.
While I have a burning passion against humanxpony fanfics... you’ve caught my interest sir. That’s rare and I commend you on it
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Thanks, glad to see you're interested.
One of my goals in writing this was to try to make a story even people who didn't like HiE fics could enjoy.
Hold up? What Universe was the last chapter? Which one is THIS chapter? What other universe will he visit? Will he visit the Rainbow Factory Universe? So many questions!!
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The last universe was of my own creation as is this one. The next one is a secret to everyone (even me), and yes there are many many questions.
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Do you select universes randomly?
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Yes and no. As of right now, Salvatore has no control over where he ends up (though that may change in the future) so to him it's random. I however,still have to come up with the universes. Some will be random, some will be super important to the plot, it all depends on what's going on in the story at the time.
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Will you be traveling to already existing fanfics?
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Honestly I haven't fully decided yet. There is ONE already existing universe I'm really looking forward to introducing though...
Está idea puede acabar o muy bien o muy mal
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I gotta say... one Nightmare Night fic does come to mind, what with cursed candy and world hopping...
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Oh wow, I'd completely forgotten about that story it's been so long.
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If you do crossover events A don’t enter the war one I’m doing unless you want a very confusing meta chapter/ did we ever get your guys name beaten up dragged threw a portal and having discord told to keep his walking bomb away from any universe connected to the one was just evicted from lol