So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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I really like this idea I don't think I have ever seen a story where someone tries to survive a grimfic Equestria or where someone tries to fix different grimfic universes
Neato idea!
7 años esperando finalmente un fimfic de HiE tipo grimdark. SOY MUY FELIZ
el primer capitulo del episodio fue calmado, interesante y bien hecho. 3,475 palabras y lograste ambientarnos y darnos una clara idea del concepto inicial, esta sera una historia que como tu dijiste: "pondra a flexionar tus musculos de la creatividad hasta el limite".
tienes mucha creatividad para el genero grimdark, y como esa categoria puede abarcar muchas cosas, ya no tienes tanta necesidad de restringirte con el gore ligero o con las creaturas y monstruos que pueden estar habitando esa realidad.
el final del primer capitulo fue algo que me sorprendio bastante, casi podrias decir que es self-insert de primera categoria(opinion personal). estoy muy emocionado por ver los siguientes capitulos en el futuro.
hay muchas imagenes en http://deviantart.com las cuales te pueden ayudar un poco con la inspiración.
Great story :)
Magick Mushrooms are one hell of a drug!
Well this looks like an interesting ride, I hope you commission me to do the cover art on this, PM me if your ever interested.
I think the premise is interesting and like that he has a clear goal but I think e will have to have his heart strings to actually show the consequences of doing nothing to help an/or failure to really give him the drive and resolve to move forward in his mission of saving all those Equestria's. Right now I see him pouting for a while in trying to get Discord to go home before actually starting to do some adventuring of his own. For Discord not wanting to actually I think there are several valid reason why he shouldn't or simply can't do anything to help all these worlds. First up bad rep: Discord already has a bad reputation in trowing ship historically and the ponies that he would be trying to help are more likely to resit his efforts rather then helping him thinking that he is in some way responsible or he had let it happen somehow. Even if he could hide behind his identity, his massive ego and sense of self importance wouldn't allow him to show anypony else that it was him how saved the day; it's just not in his MO.
Secondly lack of of Empathy: Discord has a lot of trouble putting himself in other ponies horseshoes, even if the status of his views on ponies being upgraded from playthings for his own amusement to mildly interesting to observe with occasional moment of entertainment. Plus the fact he is nearly immortal, and there don't have the same needs as ponies do and can forget about such little thing, like breathing or a hearth beat, and have not relate in any meaningful way beyond a few acquaintances and would quickly just get bored trying out of trying to help those thing that will die eventually anyway.
Thirdly saving Equestria would most likely kill him: we already seen that Discord would simply fade out of existence when he goes completely against his nature just for trowing a normal tea party for Fluttershy and trying to stop all this rampant chaos would be ephemera to him very being. The best that he could do is sending a proxy in his stead who doesn't have that constraint build into him and get to play super hero; I am sure Discord wouldn't be entirely happy with that arrangement except then the guy gets kick in the balls for entertainment value .
Fourthy there is also the fact that whatever is already throwing shit in those world already knows about Discord and already have continences prepared for his interference and Discord would just be one big fat target. On the other hand a regular puny squishy human, who are mostly unknowns would have an easier time going under the radar and wouldn't follow most of the expected patterns of behavior for anyone in Equestria.
What would also be interesting to see is what will the guy feel over time when he has to start the same thing over and over, and leave behind all the friendships he made over time or even have to start over with people/ponies he already know like Tom Cruse in The Edge of Tomorrow, it wil grade on him over time.
I will be looking forward to see more of this story and I hope you will consider my offer. Enjoy this link
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Oh a new idea.
Now I'm interested.
I am so glad you are continuing from where you left off in Well... damn. That was such a surreal piece of random grimdark that I am excited to see where this goes.
As interesting as the premise is it has one major flaw that was not questioned, if there are multiple Equestria universes then there are multiple Discords among those universes, each of them can have enough power to wipe out entire universes, and if Discord is this powerful why not just "snap" and destroy all grimdark Equestrias or just every other Equestria besides his own.
I know that we didn't make it but still... What have Hollywood done!
The nasty stain in the multiverse that will forever stay, haunting us of it's presence forever!
It even ticked off the original creator of that universe so much that he expanded the universe even further.
Not even all the Grimdark will mess with the pile of cease pool that is DBZ: Evolution!
Now that I got that out of the way, please do carry on. This fic has caught my interest.
I bet this is ALL BECAUSE THAT BURRITO!
Curse you McDonald's!
Does... does that mean...
FUCK YES!
ONE TICKET TO STAR WARS, PLEASE!
I want to meet Luke Skywalker!
4th wall.
That 4th wall.
Oooh. I don't think I've read a self-insert fanfic where the protagonist realized that they were most likely in a fanfic they themselves wrote before.
The recursivity of this thing is something to admire ^^
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I like the premise of this so far. I think it really does have a lot of potential. Also, it reminds me of an an old Sega game (based on a comic book series) I've heard of before Chakan: The Forever Man.
I think my stories felt that 4th wall break...Great story so far though.
"this story was written by you after all"
It's So Meta, Even This Acronym
(You know how many years it's been since I've used that joke?)
You my good sir, has my attention now.
Dat end thought...
It was awesome
This is soooo beyond Meta; even for me.
As the commenter finishes his first chapter into madness.
It whispers to itself.
Soundsmith meme
yes
Discord obviously hasn’t heard of the human race.
Also he gets the almighty POWERS OF CHAOS AND HE CAN’T DO COOL SHIT?! (Well I mean he can but it’s destroying the universe so)
(For all we know this story is just gonna be a string of suicide after suicide although we all know it won’t be)
Where has this comment gone
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Same here, one of my OC is looking up at the sky and raising an eyebrow in confusion.
Your first story had my curiosity.
Your second one now has my attention.
This is actually rather refreshing. I haven't written something like this myself since I was in middle school! It's honestly a nice change of pace and makes me wonder what's going to happen. Pretty much no one does these... I would say "anymore", but I feel like that's not accurate. Hm.
But thank you regardless for this!
Lol just take the easy way out by suicide
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never existed to begin with.
What bugs me here is that there is no end to this, or respite, no reward at the end, nothing. He fights and struggles in the midst of the most horrible circumstances without a way out of it, because if he fixes things then it starts over from the beginning. What's the point in any of it then? Why not just commit suicide to self-destruct and end the horror before it begins?
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The endgame is pretty clear, he just need to deal with every single grimdark pony fanfic in existence. How many can there be? A few hundred thousands? millions? Easy-peasy.
This is a very unique idea. I like it
Bro your character is playing 6d fucking chess (this is a guess) he fucking becomes some kind of fanfiction/story god and writes himself to get the powers he has to get the powers he has, this is some absolute 5head bullshit.
But you take it further since there are infinite universes creating this story means that those infinite grimdark universes are being destroyed or made not grim dark, truly amazing.
Best meta shit i have seen in my lifetime so far
Oh. That.
And what if I don't want to go through this?
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I think thats the idea there is no point for grim dark universes they are needlessly dark so no apparent reason so this is in of its self a grimdark story/muti/meta thing that only shows how pointless this all is.
P.S. please don't respond to this it is 3 am and off my rocker atm
He all, really stupid
Have to agree, ive been there once.
Met a talking 8 foot tall crab that oddly sounded like Chris Pratt.
Would not recommend visiting.
This is really cool and I hope it continues since it hasn't been updated since 2018 I hope it's not abandoned
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Granted it does take me a lot of time to update my stories nowadays, I still do, and this one was updated just the other day...
I can already see this story is going to have NO respect for the Forth Wall. NONE. ZERO.
...let's DO this!
I hope the "little" part of power granted you access to basic things like water, clothes and food, because otherwise you will be fucked