So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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They're the only line of defense.
Well things are finally starting to really heat up around the ship and the focus it's on Rarity anymore. I though that this story was going to be a high paces quick action story seeing that this was supposed to involve multiple alterations of Equestria's with little attention spent in developing on characters that are basically copies of the Mane Six and that the guy doesn't have to fonder in one world for so long. I though the idea that Twilight might have dreams of what'S happening in those other worlds interesting but I still don't get what she will have to do in the story so far if she can't intervene at all in the situation; maybe she can possess other alliterations of herself in order to help the guy in some way. I almost feel that this could be a separate story on to itself. I hope things will start to make sense soon or at least in what direction this is going at least.
My guess would be it's Luna and/or Celestia on the warpath.
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As I've stated time and again, character developement is practically everything for me, and that won't change here, at least for the most part. As for what's going on with Twilight, you'll find out... eventually.
Huzzah! Chekov’s gun has been loaded and fired baby! Let’s throttle it from grim... to dark. Can’t wait for forbidden creatures of the deep to make its starring appearance, killing poor Salvatore! Napoleon tempted fate, prepare to die... for now though we’ll sit with one of the most harsh cliff hangers and spend the time getting the popcorn ready because the shows just getting started!
What would make napoleon just vanished without a trace? The only thing i can think of would be discords magic.