Spike and Twilight have been together for their whole lives, but what happens when the time comes when the friends are supposed to split apart? A long walk in the night reveals what the future holds for the duo.
Spilight.
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I can't wait to read this.
Best ship, bro.
Why is this rated Mature?
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Misclick. My bad, b0ss.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I'm reading this NOW
This is a really good fic, I hope there will be a sequel to this.
Just a fic I wrote in-between commissions. Could have been made longer with proper story beats to show Spike and Twilight's feelings, but with my strapped time and will, this was the best I could produce.
Hopefully you dear readers enjoy it.
I really liked this. I was a little confused with Twilight's age throughout, but otherwise well done!
Just got done reading it. And man...that was REALLY sweet. So cute
I guess if I had to nitpick ANYTHING I think maybe the conversation leading up to them talking about Spike leaving could have been a bit better. Like maybe instead of them going from laughing at the gate then to silence and then talking about it, maybe you could have them laugh at the gate then continue the lighthearted conversation and have that talk slowly inch to silence with them having the concerned thoughts of Spike leaving in mind and then have them talk about it like how you did. I think this would make the stories pace a little better.
Buuuuut that's just my opinion
I'm someone who likes to take the high road when it comes to dialogue. Even then my nitpick didn't break the story at all. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED how you wrote Twilight and Spike here. This was a beautiful, short and sweet story that I loved 
Keep up the good work my good man
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Thanks for the kind words.
You are right about the dialogue, but I'm a lazy man.
May someone dedicated and talented write Spilight for us all.
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Ignore my nitpick COMPLETELY. Just saw your comment about not having enough time, I understand, sorry
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I really want to write a Spilight fic, but I just can't. I love it too much. I could never do it the justice I see in my head.
We need to get that one fox guy you like to come to the plate and write it.
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Excuses don't excuse the criticism.
Never forget or feel guilty about that.
Best ship is best.
Let's fucking do this
The fact that you made Spike categorize get rants in terms of parts is hilarious.
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deceleration is an actual word, but I think you meant declaration
made him tremble
A little ambiguous. Are you talking about the height boost that she got at the same time as her eings, or the height boost that she gets by "getting along with"/by using her wings (flying/hovering over the ground)?
If it's the first:
Even with the height boost that she got
Second:
Even with the height boost — she got along with her wings —
statue (though I'm sure that statutes also sit very still)
the urge to
in assistant
distant, metallic
with them
libraries
I don't believe that a comma goes there, but I'mma search it up...Nope, you were right.
tucked
Not a proofreading thing, but still, repetitive. Change one.
Same as before, but for some reason feels even more of a cosmetic change than the other one. Hmm...
reached
Then, with a pull, I lifted
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edit this fic instead
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I'll edit my comment once I've edited the fic, sorry if that wasn't clear xD
I didn't even know you were looking for love.”
Because I always had you by my side.” Twilight smiled as she pulled away from me, standing on all hooves.
Friggin cute as hell dude, wonderful story
acquire?
theirs
This is wonderful, I need more of this
Yet another beautiful story. I really enjoy your Spike and Twilight interactions. So full of emotion. You also really know how to set a scene and build up to the moment.
Thanks for sharing yet another epic tale of love and friendship.
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You've betrayed me
I like this quite a bit
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Thank you, dear reader.
Beautiful work. Haven't felt moved like that in quite some time.
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I'm glad to hear it.
Unfortunately, I was forced to keep still as I wrote this, so I haven't gotten much exercise myself—glad you have, though.
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I know the feeling. Keep on my friend.
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You are not my friend, my friend.
You are my brother my friend.
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/)(\
And then they had dragonpony babies.
This is a beautiful story and it made me smile. I love this ship.
The execution could use a bit of work, the grammar was a little off throughout most of the story but I liked the sentiment.
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Agreed
This story touched my feels like I touch my son, with love and affection.
p.s. I don't have a son.
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did you touch the place where sons are churned and made?
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Yes I di-, hold up one sec.
Wait, larry what are calling at this time and for? No I'm not retarded. What do you mean I can't say I touch young boys tenderly online. Alright, go f&*k yourself.
No I did not.
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do not
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Yes
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fack
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Top 10 Anime Battles of All Time.
...Well shite, this actually made me feel sood for a minute.
Wait... I thought when you said "Dancing In The Moonlight" I thought you meant Moonlight Raven? Oh well, pun shipping wasted
I can't remember why I got intrigued by this story. Why it ended up on my 'read later'-list. I never thought that SpiLight could be done right, because I didn't thought that there was a right way to do it. You've proven me wrong. And you masterfully tugged at my heartstrings.
I wholeheartedly thank you for that.
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did you want your heartstrings back?
Real talk. Thank you for the comment! Glad it made you happy.
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Thanks for the offer, but... I think you can keep them. You earned them.
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think I lost mine too :(
amazing story my friend, amazing.
Good gracious, this is just outrageously good! I enjoyed every bit, it was so slow and warm, made me feel a little giddy inside! Sad it stayed in my Read Later slot, hope you're doing well!
Needs editing for spelling and grammar, but it was a cute little story.
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The story of my life is my inability to type and spell correctly—that, and my laziness to go back and edit. Proof-read. Proof proof proof and read read read. Brought about by the fear of not making things better and the whole second draft being a waste of time. But I should do it. I have to do it. Just... one of these days, y'know?
Thank you for enjoying my story nonetheless.