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I believe that the stories we tell far outweighs all the gold in the world. Since the wisdom we can acquire from them will help envision the life we can make for ourselves.

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Prequel: Number One Assistant
You don't need to read the previous story, but it doesn't hurt to have some context :heart:


Hearth’s Warming has finally arrived!
The two long-lived best friends, Twilight and Spike, must now achieve the task of announcing to literally EVERYPONY they know that they are now a couple. However, because the two have enjoyed each other’s company so much, they’ve spent very little time preparing for this fateful night since their own fateful night a few days prior.

So, how will everypony react? How will Twilight and Spike react to their reactions?

Rated Teen: Suggestive Themes
Any criticism or feedback is much appreciated and thank you for taking the time to read this :pinkiehappy:
ARTWORK by pridark THANK YOU!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 52 )

I don't have time to read right now, but I'm psyched!

On a side note, I commissioned the same guy for art for an upcoming story. He's great.

I don't wanna ask this but, is there something I should know about her middle name Merea?

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Really? That's cool. Yeah, I LOVE his work :scootangel:

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It's Hebrew for friend or companion :twilightsmile: I thought it fit.

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Huh, intriguing.



Also,



AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

:heart: :heart: :heart: :moustache: :twilightblush: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Story used Fluff! It’s super effective.
FanficReader920 fainted!

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YES! :moustache:

I'm glad you're liking it so far :twilightsmile:

Yeah, The sequel. I'm so excited. best of luck.

Hype train commence! :twilightsmile::moustache:

It's time!!! Yes. Also great chapter with Spike's internal dialogue.

Overall, this is good, but the whole brother and sister thing was odd to me. I get that they don't see each other as such in this story, but it almost felt like you were attacking people that see their relationship that way. I don't beleive that was your intention, but that was the impression I got.

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Thank you, I'm glad you're liken it so far :twilightsmile:

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Hmm, I went back and read through some of it and... yeah, I guess can kind of see that :twilightblush: But you're right about my intentions. I have NO intentions of badmouthing or attacking those who see their relationship like that. Heck, I see their relationship as just that in the show.

This is a case where you're afraid of what people think of you, in some cases the more you think about it the more you worry or afraid of assuming the role that they assume you are. Overall, I wanted to convey that they're afraid of what everyones going to say about their news and I wanted to choose a subject that could help cause great fear in them. And the brother/sister dynamic came up for me at the time. The way they're expressing against that is them saying is 'No! There's no reason to worry about what others think of me because I already know who I am and I won't let peoples words discourage me for being the way I believe I'm meant to be.'

But, with that being said, I guess it does seem a little too strong. I was feeling inspired when I wrote that. It's not meant to be words of anger but words of passion.

But I could tone it down a little when I get to it.

Thanks for your feedback I appreciate it. I hope you're enjoying everything else though :twilightsmile:

Another great chapter! You're keeping me hooked.

YEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!:moustache::twilightsmile:
Sequel!

Wow. Nice job at addressing the whole "Brother-Sister" thing. I actually kind of hope that instead of saying anything, Spike and Twi just kiss in front of everyone. The reactions would be priceless.

Can I restate that fluff commetnfrom last chapter too? Seriously, you have a talent for writing fluffy romance fics. I could see you doing this with a lot of other ships. Fluttercord, Twicord, SpikeXEmber (Don't know their name), and who knows what else.

Also, I like how Twilight is beginning to recover from her depression, though I hope you'll still have it linger around if you continue. Its certainly not as big a problem, but depression isn't something that just goes away. I feel like now that Twilight finally has a special someone, her depression will instead manifest into doubts about her self-worth for Spike.

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Thank you, I was really nervous on how I would write romance when I first wrote Number One Assistant, but from the feedback I got there I've since felt much more confident. So thank you for saying so. (FlutterXSombra has honestly been more my cup of tea :twilightblush:)

As for how you think they'll tell everyone, well...lets just wait and see :ajsmug:

You're right, depression does NOT just go away. If you look back at my previous story you'll see I kind of addressed Twilight's self worth toward Spike and how she felt toward him since her birthday. You may ask, well how is that possible if they weren't even together yet?

Well, again...lets wait and see :ajsmug:

So much love for this chapter! Go Spilight!:moustache::twilightblush:

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Thank you, glad you're lovin it :twilightsmile:

Can someone tell me the name of this ship?
Great story, by the way. :pinkiehappy:

I gotta say seeing this story having a sequel sure does puts a smile on my face tho I don't want to ask much but I'm hoping that I get to see Twilight's own P.O.V flashback about how she had feelings for spike back then when spike had given a speech about her at her birthday, I just want to see her reaction from her perspective. But anyway I'm really glad your making a sequel to this and I'll look forward to what u have in planned for our lovely couple in the next chapter :)

Wonderful! A sequel to one of the best, if not the best TwiSpike story I've ever read! And it's so lovey-dovey I could die!
Seriously though, this is awesome!

I'm glad you addressed the elephant in the room in this chapter. I myself, am on board with Spike's view - I see them more as friends than non-biological relatives. I'm also glad that Twilight and Spike know how they will defend themselves if anypony cries out the I-word.

Oh my gosh:rainbowkiss: the sequel!!!
I waited with so much hype for this, amazing chapter btw,I like a lot the detail you put in sentimental/romantic scenes and its pacing.

I really hope to see more of this.

Pls don’t be dead. :(

Hope this continues for the holidays!

You have the blood of many a diabetic on your hands. I hope you’re happy.

Blueblood will be jealous. He knows he will never get the rank of cutest royal couple in Cosmarepolitan now.

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Thank you for your comments I appreciate it :twilightsmile:

I'm sorry for giving diabetes, but I don't condone the way anyone here got em :pinkiecrazy:

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Hey dude glad to see you're back can't wait to see how this amazing story continues

I hope you update the story on this holidays

i just finished reading your Prequel and it was amazing i hope sequel will be just as amazing

Hey, friend! Still here waiting. Dont think I forgot about you or your amazing Spikelight stories. :)

I have to say that this might be the best Twi-Spike fic I've read so far. Hope you get around to finishing it!

Genuinely hope this fic (and your writing) isn’t dead. I know college is a bitch but I really do hope you come back someday.)

I would like more please.

I don't know when this story will get an update but I can't fucking wait!

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It feels likes it's been to long I hope he's doing okay with covid and all that over the past year

“There is something that you can give me.” I kissed right under her ear, which was still drooped. “I just want to know if you can do this.”

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Comment posted by Faithful Follower deleted Mar 22nd, 2022

Looking forward to reading more of this story. Great work. :twilightsmile:

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