Amos John was just an ordinary joe kind of guy. Always busy working with the construction company as a driver and mechanic. One day, while working at Canterlot High School he gets pulled into Equestria by a dark force, erases his memories, and begins to try to control him for her own evil purposes. Without his memories he doesn't even know what he is let alone who he is. He doesn't know where he is or who he can trust and is scared out of his wits. Until a little white bunny named Angel found him and changed his life forever.
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Random guy pulled into Equestria by an unknown force because reasons? That's been done to death at this point.
Also, welcome to Fimfiction.
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TheMajorTechie thank you for the invite. And you are also correct that it's a cliche now but when I wrote this it was right after I got into the show and started reading fanfiction. I've learned so much since then so I haven't relied so much on this particular cliche since.
A horse that has amenisa and they just him out in the world? Sorry that makes no sense at all. Sure don't keep him prisoner but help him out. That breaks this story for me.
@Admiral Q: I never said that it was good. I said it was my first. We all have to start somewhere. I'm growing as a writer and the stories I'm working on now are much better. And you are right that it doesn't make sense. I've learned that stories usually follow a semblance of step by step logical progression. Just remember that even the greatest writers in literature started out with bad stories. Peace be to you.
i hope you plan for a sequel
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Wasn't planning on it, but that doesn't mean I can't write one either. I might, but I've already got a couple of stories already going on.
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Actually, literally all the amnesiac fics I've found on this site has them going out into the world