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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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I'll take the gay bullet for you all.

This needs to become a companion series to Staying Put. It would be a shame not to hear the Four Boozy Stallions expound on life, mares whatever else bothers them.


8891068
There's so much potential here. Don't let it go to waste! MOAR! Please.:fluttershysad:

Okay, that was both unexpected and hilarious.:rainbowlaugh:

Hope to see more takes of yours in this setting.

Well, an interesting take con the reversal gender world, nobody has taken this topic much further, except perhaps the gentleman for mares universe, so i hope you try a little more than others.

And here I was hoping for a bar fight.......... But it was still a very good story.

Holy shit, 29 consecutive clopfics finally broken! Your first story without the sex tag! I must be going mad

That was a fun little bit. I'm still insanely confused over who Jason is and some of the finer intricacies of this Equestria, but I enjoyed the playful slice of the universe you gave us, and it's certainly leaving me wanting to understand more.

I liked this , but I hope the trend this story belongs to does out

*reads title* UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH




I NEED AN ADULT!!!

The first fic of yours without sex and it's still m rated. I don't know if it's just your goal or something for every story of yours to be amazingly good, despite the rating, or you are just some sort of masochist with this shit.

Also, idea for a smut there. Masochism/sadism fic.

I WANNA TAKE YOU TO A HAY BAR, HAY BAR HAY BAR!!
I'VE GOT SOMETHING TO PUT IN YOU!! :trollestia:

That was fun. I was expecting more rage but the kind of confused acceptance of the situation was infinitely more entertaining.

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If you need an adult you have no place reading this =P

Nice little one shot. Great to see Jason expand his social circle, however reluctantly. Interesting take on the guys as well.

Obligatory. :moustache:

And hopefully Iron Will would try to screw him later.

Fixed.

Already writing sequels without finishing the predecessor, that's the Intricate Disguise I know.

This was a lovely bit of world building, here's to more :eeyup:!

8891068
A true bro, you will not be forgotten.

That was...a very different joke than expected. :rainbowlaugh:

Saw this story. Immediately thought of this song.

8892306
I had a gay friend in collage and went to a gay bar with him a few times. Its no different than a regular nightclub / country western bar type of place.

Not much different really. There isn't any bizarre or unusual behavior going on. The only oddity is getting hit on. Being a strait guy I don't get hit on at bars and night clubs. Im the one that has to approach the mares, so it was a little odd to be the one being approached and being bought free drinks from people across the bar.

The Monk

The vodka thing reminded me of something. I think in the main story you had him making vodka out of corn, but vodka is potato liquor. Moonshine is made from corn though.

8891068

big fuck off minotaur

i spy another ozzy fan.

8892998
That's what I thought at first. But apparently the author knows their liquor. Nowadays most vodka is made from rice, grains and corn.

8892349
That makes two of us... my mind even went so far as to try and sync the title of the story to that song's melody

Forgot how much I love this song.

Thanks for reminding me. :coolphoto:

Edit: Note to self. Check the comments before posting a comment. -_____-

I just get the feeling that once/if the alcohol starts hitting him anywhere close to where they think it's going to affect him, some interesting things are going to be said.

"Wait, how many?"

"A loooooooot. Too many to say. Apache helicopter."

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Isn't it strange how you can find a song for almost any situation?

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Maybe? I'm not really the best judge of strangeness; I saw and/or did some really strange stuff in my marching band days

"Big Mac over here works over at Sweet Apple Acres. He does all the accounting and bookkeeping because his sisters don't let him near the labour work, let alone near another mare."

Ohhhkay, this is definitely getting alternate universe, there; him doing hard labour on the farm is 100% confirmed in canon :trixieshiftright:

Heck, I don't think they're gay.
They're obviously Europonian.

8894941
I saw some real s**t when I was on tour.

And by tour and real s**t, I mean when I went on a tour around a toilet factory. HA HA HA!

8893974
i walked into that one XD

Let's start a war ! Start a nuclear war !

...and then gay stallion sex happened.

I feel like there should be another chapter to this at some point in the future.

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at the stallion bar, stallion bar, stallion bar WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

9070346 Gaybraham Lincoln wanting to start a nuclear war at the gay bar is the biggest fucking meme I've seen in a while.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Heh that was fun to read.

What happed with Twi and Rarity?

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