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Muggonny


Use words wisly, for they are limited ~ Legacy [02:10]

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This story is a sequel to Thy Little Filly Twi'


The King is dead, long live the obsolete Queen!
The King Lives
After a brave and daring mission into the Dark Part, the darkest realm known to ponykind (or at least in her imagination), Twi has conquered all fears. In doing so, all the shadows in her life are nothing but shade from the sun.
He Will Return
But when the sun is gone, the land is cloaked in shadow, therefore, there is no use running and hiding from it. Twi, though, is too young to understand; Twi wants to understand; Twi will understand.
He Hungers
But does she care? No way! She has more important things to worry about. Like making diplomatic decisions with her daycare friends, joining a gang (also with her daycare friends), and wondering who the heck the dark, mysterious mare is that keeps appearing in her dreams.
His Children Hunger
That said, she's not completely sure the job is done.
He Wanes
The job is far from done.
He Waits
More then she realizes.


Edited by Razalon The Lizardman and Starlix!

*It isn't a requirement to read the original one-shot, but it does add context to why the fic is written in the narrative it's written in.*

**On hiatus until I decide to pick it back up. But don't fret, chapter 1 can be considered a satisfying ending if it comes down to that.

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Comments ( 16 )

Admittedly, the thought of someone breaking into a house and leaving money in exchange for nonvital organs is kind of creepy. For starters, what if I use the money to buy more candy (or potatoes, I don’t know)? That means I would lose more teeth and the tooth fairy would have to give me more money, thus eventually achieving bankruptcy. Also, isn't "tooth" singular? This is two teeth we're talking about here, the plural form, wouldn't this be a job for the "Teeth" Fairy?

I am so with you there, Twi. Even though I've only read up to there, I'm already hooked. Keep up the great work!

8889309
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Have you read any further so far?

8891663
A little, but I've been busy. This is definitely a must finish, though.

8891952
Keep going, I hate it when I'm reading an interesting story and it isn't finished.

You missed the opportunity for so many Lion King references!

8892870
May be a while until the next chapter then. Initially, I plan on releasing new chapters monthly, but the computer I use to type everything on is school owned, so I'm stuck with using my phone to write. That means it will take extra effort ti pump new chapters out.

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I hate iPads and iPhones for that sorrow thing. It's so hard.

Hello,

I have reviewed your story as part of the Reviewer Cafe. I hope that it is helpful to you, and as always, thank you for the time and effort you've put into this story. :twilightsmile:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/379851/review-life-of-twi-by-muggonny

This was utterly bizarre. I did notice that you had the more malevolent tone reduced for the most part, at least compared to the previous installment. Still, I feel like you're crafting one big comedic villain origin story AU. The way Twilight interacts with her toys makes me worried about how she will treat the Main Five and Spike too.

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