• Published 5th May 2018
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Equestria Girls: Time, Space and Justice - Time Agent pony



Throughout the fabric of time, heroes are disappearing, being erased by some unknown force, its up to The Rainbooms to find out who is doing this and stop them before its too late

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Epilogue

Canterlot, The Present.

"Well," Rip said, as soon as the Waverider had landed, "Here was are, present day, moments after you left."

"Wow," Sunset smiled, "no one at CHS is going to believe this."

"I still can't believe it myself," Twilight said, "we actually travelled through time."

"And I still can't believe how our actions impact the future," Rainbow Dash added.

"Your lives as heroes have made a difference, " Rip declared, as The Rainbooms and Gwenpool turned to leave the Waverider, "but you all go on to lead exciting and significant lives, after you hang up your costumes."

"Well," Rarity said, "it's good to know that with us around, the future is in safe hands."

"Goodbye, Rainbooms," Rip replied, "the Time Masters and the Time Breau won't forget your actions here to day."

"See ya around, Rip" Pinkie Pie acknowledged, as the girls and Gwenpool exited the Waverider's control room.


Canterlot

"Everything seems normal," Fluttershy said, as she, the girls and Gwenpool walked through the streets of Canterlot, it was like Kang's invasion had never happened, everyone seemed to be going about their normal lives.

"Yeah," Sunset replied, "but where are our friends?"

Just then, a voice called out, "Hey, you guys!"

The voice belonged to rookie Green Lantern, Kyle Rayner, as he landed near where the girls and Gwenpool were. He was followed by Quicksliver along with Silk, Starfire and Twilight's dog Spike.

"Where were you guys?" Silk asked, as she, Starfire and Quicksliver joined Kyle.

"What do you mean?" Twilight responded.

"Don't give us that," Quicksliver said, indignity, "we've been waiting for you for ten minutes and you guys just happen to turn up now."

"Indeed," Starfire nodded, "I am also wanting the explanation."

"We all are wanting 'the explanation'," Silk agreed.

"Yeah, about those ten minutes," Rainbow Dash smiled, rubbing the back of her head.

"It's long story," Sunset replied.


Canterlot Mall, The Planet Krypton restaurant.

"Whoa," Quicksliver remarked.

They were all sipping Martian Manhunter milkshakes, aside from Starfire who was drinking mustard, while the girls and Gwenpool explained where they had been.

"So we were erased from existence?" Silk said.

"And the eight of you travelled through time?" Starfire responded, with the same amount of disbelief as Silk.

"The things we saw," Sunset remarked, "and the things we learned."

"Seeing how our actions shape the future," Twilight reflected, "it's truly amazing.


Canterlot High School, the next day.

The girls arrived at school, everything seemed normal.

"Well, at least everything's back to normal," Fluttershy breathed, as she, the girls and their friends headed to their first lessons.

"Excuse me," a voice interrupted, "we're new here, could you help us out?"

The girls turned to face the owner of the voice, the owner was one of seven teenagers.

"Well," Rarity smiled, "you've come to the right people."

"Follow us," Sunset said.

Before the girls could lead on Applejack stopped, "sorry," she realised, "I forgot to ask your names."

"Oh," one of the teenagers replied, "it's Arizona."

The moment the name left the teen's mouth, Applejack froze.

"Pardon," she queried.

"Arizona," the teen replied, "my names Arizona."

Arizona went on to introduce the rest of her group consisting of: Oleander, Pom, Tianho, Paprika, Velvet and Vance Astrovik.

The girls stared at the seven.

"Are you guys OK?" Oleander asked, "you all look like you've seen a ghost."

"Sorry about that," Sunset replied, "Some of you remind us of some people we know."

"Anyway," Rarity smiled, as regained her composure, "welcome to CHS."

"You'll have a really great year," Twilight remarked.

And with that, the group of teenage superheroes and their new friends headed for class.

Comments ( 9 )

Excellent job on the epilogue. I LOVED the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and introductions to the modern day versions of Human Arizona and Velvet as well as the other human versions of the Them's Fightin' Herds characters .


Here is a possible addition for further sequels:


1. If you DO go with the "Thanos as the main villain of the next story" as well as the "Rainbooms and Justice Force hunting through five different alternate universes for the Infinity Gems" (since one of the gems would logically be in the Justice Force and Rainbooms' universe), one of the other five gems could be in the Mirror Equestria (assuming you have some familiarity with the "Reflections" arc from the IDW comics) in addition to one each in the main Equestria, the Them's Fightin' Herds universe and Cuphead's universe). And the last one could be in the same universe as Dexter's Laboratory and the Powerpuff Girls.

2. If you DO go with one of the Infinity Gems being in the Mirror Equestria, the Rainbooms and/or the Justice Force could ally themselves with the heroes of that world (i.e. Princess Trixie, Duchess Chrysalis, Captain Goodguy and Doctor Muffins just to name a few). And, in addition to Thanos and his forces, the heroes could also be tangling with Empress Cadenza (Cadance's evil counterpart) and the Mane Six's criminal counterparts.

3. If you DO include one of the Infinity Gems being in the same universe as Dexter's Laboratory and the Powerpuff Girls, the Rainbooms and/or the Justice Force could ally themselves with Dexter, the Powerpuff Girls, Monkey, the Justice Friends, Blue Falcon and Dynomutt while in that universe. And the heroes could tangle with your choice of any of the members of the local heroes' rogues galleries.

and 4. There could also be stuff that set up the Human Version of Sombra being the main villain of the story AFTER the next coming one. Such as brief scenes of a shadowy figure hunting for technology that would grant him potent telekinetic abilities, the ability to turn intangible at will and the power to telepathically induce illusions reflecting his targets' worst fears many times magnified.

Of course, these ARE just ideas and I will respect that you have the right to do your stories the way YOU want to.

nicely done; also:

"Are you guys OK?" Oleander asked, "you all look like you've seen a ghost."
"Sorry about that," Sunset replied, "Some of you remind us of some people we know."

meanwhile, in various time frames, past and present, seven seemingly unrelated people briefly wondered if someone was talking about them...or HAD been talking about them; WILL be talking about them? ugh: time travel makes verb tenses REALLY confusing sometimes...

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Glad you like the epilogue:twilightsmile:, and I'll see what can be done in the future:raritywink:

9337230
Glad you enjoyed the epilogue

9337244
Thanks very much both for the response back and the consideration. :-D

First of all, I would like to wish you Happy Holidays.

Second, I have a couple of possible ideas for prologue and epilogue scenes for the next story:

1. In a prologue scene set shortly after "Roller Coaster of Friendship", it could be revealed that Vignette Valencia was actually taking orders from her grandmother, a Cold War era mercenary who knew about the Rainbooms and was trying to pre-emptively remove the threat they posed.

2. In an epilogue scene, it could be revealed that Vignette Valencia is actually the grand-daughter of the human version of Chrysalis, who was, as aforementioned, a mercenary back in the Cold War and is, of course rather peeved that Vignette failed and decides to handle things herself after she upgrades herself enough to stand a much better chance against the Rainbooms AND has an army capable of keeping the rest of the super-heroes busy. This would set up prologue and epilogue scenes for the story AFTER next where she not only finds ways to give herself super-powers, but also gathers a sizable army of hired thugs that she upgrades into super-powered, but controllable pawns.

3. A possible prologue scene could have the Rainbooms working with the human counterparts of the Them's Fightin' Herds characters (particularly Applejack and Rainbow taking turns doing light sparring with Arizona after it is revealed that Arizona is as strong as Applejack and as fast as Rainbow as well as Twilight and Sunset working together to train along with Oleander after it is shown that she has similar powers to Raven and Fluttershy simply having a quiet chat with Pom).

and 4. For a possible epilogue scene, the Dazzlings could be seen escaping from prison with Adagio finding a mystic artifact that allows her to copy Sunset's telepathy, Twilight's telekinesis and Rarity's gem construct ability, Aria finding an artifact that allows her to duplicate Applejack's super-strength and Rainbow's super-speed and Sonata finding an artifact that grants her the ability to mimic Fluttershy's power to talk to animals and Pinkie's ability to super-charge sugar.

Of course, these ARE just ideas and I will more than respect your right to veto the ideas if they are not to your liking.

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I really like the like the ideas you have presented:twilightsmile:, I'll see what can be done in the future:raritywink:

And a Happy Holidays to you too:pinkiesmile:

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Okie-dokie. And thanks again.

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