In the first Equestria Girls movie, we saw that Sunset Shimmer was the most powerful girl at Canterlot High. But how exactly did she become a bully and how did she cope with the human world after she left Princess Celestia and jumped through the portal? We don't know but we each have our ideas on how.
Update: This story will now be cancelled due to not gaining anymore inspiration for further chapters. The story started to go all over the place with new ideas that I personally didn't like. For those who wanted to follow this story, I'm sorry.
Chapters (7)
This opening chapter is both funny and sad.
It's funny to see Sunset's very first moments as a human being, and yet also sad that she's sleeping outside - which is, realistically, how things probably would go.
Good stuff here!
So, Fluttershy was the very first human that Sunset met? I like that idea. And again, you used humor nicely, with Sunset's first fumbling interactions, but also still include Sunset's bullying behavior.
Wow. Sunset's lucky. The biggest luck I ever had with finding loose cash was three bucks. But she found a 20!
That's "mess," there.
XD But this was lots of fun. Especially Sunset's woes with the drink machine!
XD This was lots of fun.
I am definitely going to be following this story, and see how Sunset's first day goes.
Thank you all so much for the really nice comments!
I never imagined my first story would turn out so well, but it really brightens my day to know that it is.
I'm enjoying this story! Although, why didn't she just turn around and go back through the portal if she was starting to regret her decision? It couldn't have closed on her, could it?
This story is great so far. I'm enjoying it.
Fluttershy in any world is adorable.
Heh, not bad. Sunset handled that first day far better than I expected. XD
"principal" NOT "principle." One's a person and the other is an intangible concept. XD
That said, this wasn't bad work. I could definitely see Sunset completely freezing up when she first met the human world Celestia!
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Yep. That's what I get for using a phone to write my stories. I swear, autocorrect is worse on FiMFiction than literally everything else.
Ah shit, she’s fully arrived and arrogant.
Not a bad start to Sunset's career as an arrogant bully.