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I AM THE FRIST person to like, comment and favourite this. This was short and sweet just like muffins, but aside from that, I found this fairly funny. You win the 74th annual random comment thingie-ma-bob...yeah I'm gonna go now
I'll just...lower my hand now.
It was quite good! For someone who claims not to write comedy it's quite a feat. My main complaint is that it fell into your normal trap of not enough writing! You need to write more, detail more and and the meaty filling to the delicious pastry that you keep serving us with these fics! (That's a pretty good one isn't it? I'm impressed with it.)
971510 Well, I only live to satisfy you. I realize it was pretty short. Nice metaphor, also.
971549 Thankyou! And write more! More I say!
972832 I'm glad you liked it. This was my first attempt at writing comedy, so I'm glad someone thought it was funny.
As much as I like shipping these two ... this was a good read. Although I now have the line 'No ... Lyra straight' in my mind as she walks away from Bart and the Waco Kid..
This was cute and pretty funny. I knew from the start that the picnic would be cutesy-awkward... insert Pinkie Pie. I giggled.
*grins* Very cute and sweet. Felt a bit unfinished but that doesn't detract from how funny the fic is.
This was glorious!
Well done!