Forty-Two, Twenty

Big Macintosh held in his hooves a note. An ominous note. With a nary a clue of who wrote it, or what it entailed, he sets out on a quest to crack the cryptic code in time. Old-western melodrama ensues.

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Pitro

Pitro #1 · Aug 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

That was really good! I loved it!

ATSF Asbel

ATSF Asbel #2 · Aug 2nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Thanks! Glad ya enjoyed it!

Placebo

Placebo #3 · Aug 2nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

If there's ever a criticism I have for a story, 90% of the time it's lack of detail.

But with you, man, just.. Egad! I feel like you poured half of a thesaurus and countless hours learning about trains and old-timey melodramas into a short story. Simply Superb.

Wonderful job.

BobtheLurker

BobtheLurker #4 · Aug 2nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

DAT IMAGERY.

Too bad this is a one shot. This story could really go somewhere if you wanted it to.

ATSF Asbel

ATSF Asbel #5 · Aug 3rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Mainly I wanted to throw something out there, in order to cure my latest bout of writer's block. More fics on the way!

ATSF Asbel

ATSF Asbel #6 · Aug 3rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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More detail? GOT IT. I'll take that into account for future reference.
And much of the rail stuff I didn't have to research...I've been a railroad enthusiast for about as long as I can remember, so this was a natural fic for me to start off with.

Placebo

Placebo #7 · Aug 3rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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I meant you NAILED the amount of detail you put into it. Doubt more could ever hurt, but there was plenty enough for great imagery. My father was a railroad conductor for some time, so it was nice seeing accurate terms and descriptions. Things like that just really pull the reader into the story.

Again, Great job.

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