Twilight's been living a charmed life on Butterfly Island. All her friends have reassured her that there's no need to leave the island because everything a pony could want is right here. They're doing it because they want what's best for her, right...?
Then a mysterious, secretive unicorn named Starlight Glimmer arrives to the island, with wild claims that Twilight has been lied to all her life, and the only way to escape her gilded cage is to do exactly as Starlight says. Starlight's a complete stranger to Twilight, but her story is too outlandish to make up. Which means it must be true. Which means obeying her is the right thing to do. Right...?
After all, you can't betray ponies who were never your friends in the first place....
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things are defiantly not right on that island
You've done a great job at creating the pervasive feeling that something is very wrong. I find myself intrigued. Keep up the good work.
this does remind me of the move shutter island, I'm interested to see how it goes.
this is intense
and the mystery thiccens
and the plot thickens
what a twist
wow i did not see that coming
BRING ME NOTHER
Day as shiny has wings
Of course if this AU Twilight is like cannon Twilight deep down Chrysalis might have just set the timer to a magic bomb that's going to blow up in her face.
I'm getting familiar vibes from this you know that one movie where a guys entire life was a show
What's gonna happen next o.o I'm so excited
Hm.
Well, it finished.
And:
Uhhhhhhhhhh.....
Oh, this is fun. Who's right and who's lying. Who can you trust.
A sequel would be awesome though
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Thanks for the feedback; it means a lot