"Don't Kill, and Don't be killed, that's the best anyone can strive for"- Asriel Dreemurr, Undertale
When Lukas, a sixteen years old high schooler finds himself in a dark room surrounded by Changelings, He is placed in a cacoon, now with the help of his friend Emilee,he must face the consequences
Warning: This Is Nowhere Near The Most Original Fic on Fimfiction, If you don't like that, Proceed with caution!
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What originality! I haven't seen anything like it on this site at all!
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I know it's not quite original, it's still better than another HiE story though
Also, thank you for being honest and giving some criticism instead sugarcoating it
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You know there's an edit option for comments, right?
8813801
Yeah, still trying to get used to the site. Especially because I'm on mobile right now
Very Intriguing Start! Can’t Wait For More.
Merp
I'm working on one too
but its very different
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This kind of story isn't that uncommon, I tried to make it different because usually it's a pony transforming
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I wonder if you can continue it? I'd love to be a proof reader! But I'd like to hear your ideas on future chapters more than proof read if I could. Sorry if it's confusing you.
(Btw I mean this comment JTLYK)
story seems kinda meh so far, but it's just started so i'm going to keep it in my 'read later' for now to see if it gets more interesting later on.
"mea" just for proofreading
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Thanks For Pointing That Out, I fixed it
Interesting