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In hopes of breaking her normal routine, Twilight decides to make an effort to get away from her books and spend as much time with her friends as possible, dedicating one whole day to each of them.

Though nothing is as it seems. While spending a day with Bubble Berry, she receives a letter from Princess Celestia informing her that something sinister and magical is afoot in Ponyville, causing that day to be repeated. But with Bubble Berry asking her out on a date that very same day, Twilight may not have time to find the source of the anomaly while she comes to terms with the feelings developing between herself and one of her closest friends.

This story was a part of the FimFiction LOEG Story Swap of August 2012, and originally appeared on Pen Stroke's account

First Published
4th Aug 2012
Last Modified
4th Aug 2012

Comments ( 131 )

#1 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

A somehow R63 Berry and regular Twi in the same universe?


*Rushes to read it*

... WOW... That was pretty darn good! (Don't know why I was expecting anything else, though. xD One single mistake I saw in passing was Spike being lower cased in the beginning, something about spike's something. Sorry I'm too lazy, but a simple Ctrl + F should find it. :3)

Thanks for a great start to a PinkLight fic! I mean, I know it says complete, but it COULD be continued, whether directly, or indirectly, such as somepony ELSE finding Nivek, etc. I know you're busy, so I won't be crushed if you never make a sequel, but there's something to think about if you have the time! :3 Thanks for the great read!

#2 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Wait is this ground hog day cross over?

#3 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Before I read... if Pinkie is Berry in this, shouldn't it be tagged AU?

EDIT: and now it makes sense. That was cute and heartwarming.

#4 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I never heard of this, is it one of your new stories (i.e. not featured on EQD)


I'm still going to read it either way

#5 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1027428 Read the story, there's a plausible explanation for it.

#6 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Pen Stroooooke!!!!!!

#7 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

*stands on table with noose around neck* I will never be a good author like Pen Stroke i might as well end it all

*jumps off table causing the rope to pull tight*

*rope breaks (cheep rope) dropping gnome to floor*


#8 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1027467Ahhh!!Your Emotions!!They mock me !!!!:raritydespair:

#9 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Wow, this was brilliant!

#11 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

>Pen Stroke

>First Ship Fic

>Chooses Twinkie




I guess in a universe with griffins, dragons, magic, and other assorted mythical fun, there could be genies as well.

Nivek, huh...interesting

If only we had vendors selling casual all-powerful magical beings:raritydespair:

#12 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

interesting read to say the lest.

Now I am going to sleep. 3:10 am.

#13 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Your name.....is sexy..:rainbowkiss:

#14 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Pen Stroke, I do not read shipping/Romance fics very often, but since you wrote it I was willing to give it a shot.

Conclusion: It's on par with your other works. :scootangel:

#15 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Straight TwiBerry... that ends with Twinkie. Brilliant! :yay: A much-loved pair, done well.

#16 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

That wasn't half bad. The whole 'Kevin backwards' thing was kinda... iunno. I reckon there was more you could have done with a Genie's name. This fandom spawns a billion punny ponified names.

#17 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·


...was actually pretty adorable. I rather enjoyed the groundhog/genderbend combination story...

#18 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I haven't read the story yet,but-BUBBLE BERRY IS THE BEST GENDERBEND_MANESIX.After him is Butterscotch.

#19 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I read this because, well it was you. And this was just a good as I thought it would be. LOVE IT! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

#20 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Pen Stroke, why do I love every freaking thing you write?!?!?! Another original idea with a happy ending. Keep it up, Pen.

#21 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm sensing MLP-meets-Groundhog-Day here.  And is that a male Pinkie Pie in the cover image?  :rainbowderp:

#22 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Sooooooo AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

#23 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

D'awh, this was so cute.

<3 Twinkie.

#24 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Nivek backwards is Kevin. That someone ya know?

#25 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

That title... How much do you know about Flutter Ponies?

#26 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

How To Tell A Story Is Going Well, Tip #827:  "You've figured it out halfway through, but you still have to read it to the end, because it's that good."

This was that good.

#27 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Lemme be up with ya. I'm a white Southern Republican, so you probably had my political beliefs regarding homosexuality figured out at "white".

And I love this fic. Awesomely done. Is there an applause switch on this laptop or something? *fidgets with it* Like I said, white Southerner, machinery's not a forte. Guess I'll settle for moustaches.


Moustache, moustache, moustache. Damn that word is fun to say out loud.

#28 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·



:twilightangry2: IT'S OVER 9000

Whoo, okay, got that out of my system. This is a great shipfic... And somehow I'd think Pinkie would behave exactly like this if the opportunity presented itself. The only thing I could possibly gripe about was how quickly Twilight accepted what happened. If it were me, I'd be a tad concerned that Pinkie's response to rejection was to reshape reality to her whim.

Still a great read! Am I watching you yet? I think I should. :twilightsmile:

#29 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

This story was awesome!:rainbowkiss:

#30 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Reading this story was a time well spent.

#31 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Oh man, that was awesome. Like hit a part of my soul.

#32 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

What did I just Read? :pinkiegasp:

#33 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Okay, that was really fun and really sweet. +Thumb :twilightsmile:

#34 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

First, I'm glad you didn't make an over 9000 joke! Second, in my mind, Norm Macdonald voiced the genie. Very cute fic. Greened thumbed!

#35 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

Adding to read later, this sounds good. :trixieshiftright:

#36 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

So what was the second wish? :trixieshiftright:

#37 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

*taps hoof to her chin*

... This requires more studying.

And perhaps a fic like the current 'reversal' fic where Dusk Shine is with the 5 mares, only with Twiight with the 5 Stallions. Maybe.

#38 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1027601:ajbemused:Stop mocking me!!!!!!!!!!!!:raritycry:

#39 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

This got featured?:rainbowhuh:Notsuprised.:trixieshiftright:

#40 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

1 thing to say: BRILLIANT:pinkiehappy:

#41 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

So I guess it's a good thing that I kept reading Bubble Berry's lines in Pinkie Pie's voice?

#42 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I :heart: it! It's so awesome!

#43 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

them feels :heart:

#46 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·

Pre read comment: Whats up with the influx of all the "singular R63" stores that hit featured lately?

#47 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·


I believe that the Second wish was to replay the day...

#48 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·

Great story.

I really felt for all the characters.

Grammar seemed good.

Altogether, an interesting premise!

I know it's Completed, but a sequel would certainly be welcome here...

Maybe more Genie antics?

Pinkie and Twi having matured in their relationship?

In any case, this was excellent.

That is all.

Journcy Out.


#50 · 110w, 1d ago · · ·

O loved it! So awesome. Twinkie is my favorite ship, and I like how you pulled this off.

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