Hello everyone!! Wanted to let you know that i have accounts on Furaffinity and Fanfiction under the name PuzzleMaster1998. I love doing puzzles, adore foxes, and favorite villain is Chrysalis.
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8802425
WHy?
8802439
I figured man. I just think your comment was hilarious. I died laughing!!
8802453
Thanks.
Shits about to get real.
8802468
Yep. Let riddles commence!!
Dude, I love it so far especially when you put Lullaby for a Princess in here towards the end. That's my favorite fan animation and song in mlp ever!
8802480
Yay!!!
I hate cliffhangers. The longer the wait the more frustrated and excited I get. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8802651
Well its been updated
8802689
Indeed it has. That last riddle stumped me good.
8802718
Great!!! I knew it would!
What about the last line?
8802724
The king shtick? Hmmmm. I'm not sure but I think ol spinxy needs to get out more and our adventurer might be her ticket.
8802735
Youll have to wait and see.
I've got a riddle: Why is a Raven like a writing desk?
:P
As for that last one, I'm not sure how well it works. Given the shape, I don't think you can call it a 'box'
8802972
because they both flaps?
Doing a 500 piece puzzle in only 45 minutes, having seen the whole image for only seconds? What kind of madman is this guy?
I... Don't understand the inkstand one, I'm afraid.
While it's understandable English, it reads like you've never written something in your life. One speaker per paragraph, no exceptions. Capitalize pronoun "I".
8803427
True. Thanks.
8803325
It's actually clever word play. kst in the middle, in the beginning, and at the end. They mean the actual words I've put in red. Not that it has "kst" at the beginning middle and end. As the riddle reads it has KST in the middle: Inkstand when it says IN the beginning, it means the actual word "in" again inkstand, and you can probably figure out by now AND the end. Yep: inkstand.
8803307
From what I understand, it's a riddle from Alice and Wonderland, though I heard it in a movie about a Unicorn.
According to what I've read it doesn't actually have a 'real' answer. Though the popular answer seems to be: Edgar Allen Poe wrote on both.
I came up with the answer that both contained feathers. Referencing how back then we used feathers as a quill to hold ink and write.
Probably couldn't really use that riddle as it has no real answer.
The Sphinx probably would know the answer to this one, but my favorite riddle to ask people is:
What CAN be seen by the naked eye, and when you put it into a barrel, it makes the barrel lighter?
8803689
its a hole.
8803695
Yep. Sadly that's the best I've got.
Yeah I'm liking the story! More please.
8803812
Whats your favorite part so far?
And since you like the story so much, you can help me with a name. I need a girl cat name.
8803812
Also, i didn't expect this story to become so popular so fast. I'm shocked.
8803815
My favorite part so far are the riddles. Still can't believe I kept getting stumped on some of those. Like seriously some of the answers were obvious and they made me facepalm.
As for the cat name how's about cream? Get cause she's a cat. I've got others like fuku or kit. ( short for kit-kat ) and a few more.
8803823
K. WHat did you think of the egg riddle?
8803826
That's the facepalming one I was talking about. It also made me laugh my was off. You said that one was from a book you read right?
8803831
Yes. The Hobbit. Its my favorite riddle.
I asked a girl at work the riddle, and when i told her the answer, she told me that she was mad at herself for not knowing it since she is a Tolkien fan.
8803834
Pft that must have been a laugh you guys had.
8803837
yes indeed.
8803839
So how long are you planning to make this story?
8803847
Well, ive already started the next chapter. It has 500 words so far.
8803847
But it will probably take about 2 weeks.
I'm gonna be unable to work on this for a week due to being with parents.
Fucking shit man another cliffhanger?!?! Why do I get the feeling the foxes will become anthros next chapter?
8804080
Hehheh. JUst wait and see.
Nice job man can't wait for the clop.
overall i have to say i like this story very much ,though i have a few small issues with it,such as near the last 2 or 3 chapters it seemed like your were rushing because the details were becoming more and more less and you were skipping time far to often ,and lastly when they reached ponyville you showed no reactions of various pony's to the girls no one freaking out or anything it kind of makes me a bit worried about how the clop is going to turn out
I’ll be honest. This first chapter is really hard to read. It’s like every single action is robotic, forced, and ridiculous. I’m gonna try and read through to see if it gets better, but you might want to consider reworking this, it is a serious off-putter.
Yeah, I have to stop here. There are absolutely no redeeming qualities about this story, the main character is about as relatable as Peewee Herman and a the plot is about as thin as the shitty toilet paper you’d find at a gas station. I’m willing to bet that you’re just gonna turn this into Gary Stu and his brain dead bimbo harem.
8803689
I remember that hole riddle from "Are you Afraid of the Dark" first episode if I remember correctly.
My favorite riddle is
The man who makes it doesn't need it, The man who needs it doesn't want it and the man who uses it doesn't know it. What is it?
A grave
This is a fantastic first sentence that is then wasted by literally everything following it.
8805396
Eh. I'm editing it, with help.
8805521
> turn this into Gary Stu and his brain dead bimbo harem.
Hahaha. You read the description. You read the tags. And you just now realize this?
******
Anyway...
I'm enjoying this. My only complaint is the the chapters are short. You could combine them and have a decent length chapter. (2k words + 2k words = sweet spot chapter length imho.)
And, thank you for posting.
8806036
Don't know who Gary Stu is, but TO answer your comment about the chapters, I tried to make them at least a 1,000 words each. BUt i was unable to without messing up cliffhangers.
Glad you read and enjoyed the story though.
8802425
that sounds like an ideal saturday to me?