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What does this have to do with ponies?
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What do you mean?
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Your title and description doesn't feel like it's about ponies, nor does it feel like it relates to ponies. It just seems to be about pathfinder.
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🤨 The main character is the new Pathfinder. I should also mention that is story probably a year old and just now posted it.
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My point is. It doesnt really draw the reader in
I sense a overprotective sibling moment coming up
Who's ready to fly on a zipline?
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What?
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Apex legends? The pathfinder legend?
I think you should just continue it as it is already quite enjoyable if feeling a little rushed. I mean I’ve read good stories that have had rockier starts.
Carry it on
carry the story on
Carry on
Carry on my dude
carry on
Carry it on
Carry on man this is getting good
That was epic I'm happy Celestia joined the herd.
This was a awesome/sweet and heart warming first chapter.
This was awesome and hilarious chapter. Its awesome Luna made a herd with him and Vetra I hope Celestia joins the herd .
Is this story..............dead?
If anything its needs a little fine tuning but its of to good start
Will this continue?
Curious on what will happen.
Where's Spike?
Also, not really fond of how Luna was really afraid of that xenomorph.
She faced terrible nightmares and has quite some power, she really shouldn't be THAT scared.
Rewrite the romance is terrible and as degrading explenation is it is better when it is forgettable and you dont need it than when you need it and dont have it.