I think you should just continue it as it is already quite enjoyable if feeling a little rushed. I mean I’ve read good stories that have had rockier starts.
Rewrite the romance is terrible and as degrading explenation is it is better when it is forgettable and you dont need it than when you need it and dont have it.
Who's ready to fly on a zipline?
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What?
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Apex legends? The pathfinder legend?
I think you should just continue it as it is already quite enjoyable if feeling a little rushed. I mean I’ve read good stories that have had rockier starts.
Carry it on
carry the story on
Carry on
Carry on my dude
carry on
Carry it on
Carry on man this is getting good
If anything its needs a little fine tuning but its of to good start
Rewrite the romance is terrible and as degrading explenation is it is better when it is forgettable and you dont need it than when you need it and dont have it.