After learning of an ancient dueling ritual she'd missed out on while trapped in the moon, Princess Luna becomes determined to try a round of pistols at dawn herself.
Now if she could only find somepony willing to duel her.
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This was hilarious
Don't suppose we could get a sequel covering this book?
I smell a big old storm of CHAOS!!!
I, paradoxically, both want to read it, and dread ever seeing it.
... I was listen to the animated 'Hamilton' musical while reading this. It felt appropriate to skip to 'Ten Duel Commandments'
That was nuttier than a two-gallon barrel of squirrel poop.
Imaginary criticism.
This was delightfully silly, well done.
I have to admit, I did not see that one coming. Well done!
Is it wrong that I laughed harder at the AN Clip than at the story? THere was still a good bit of laughter for the story, but that clip took me off guard.
Next Luna needs to duel Andrew Jackson or Alexander Hamilton.
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Wrong!
Aaron Burr
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Excuse me, are you, Aaron Burr, sir?
8796588
It depends, who's asking?
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Oh, sure, sir
I’m Alexander Hamilton, I’m at your service, sir
Tell me. Are you familiar with the Ten Duel Commandments?
Dreadnought
What does the insulting one do? Insult you in limericks?
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I would imagin it gives you a riddle where the answer is you insulting yourself.
And that last book might bring back royal oversight of publishing.. that or holding them and the author responsible for his actions from reading the book
This was great! Like a comedic Barry Lyndon.
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Yes
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I'm a bigger fan of the image of a Sphinx just chilling and shouting mildly rude things at passersby.
"Your mane looks stupid! That dress makes you look fat! Your tail smells funny! Those horseshoes do not work with those socks!"
I have not read this yet, but the premise sounds fu
king brilliant
And for your enjoyment, here is one of my favorite dueling scenes:
There's a way out! You don't have to accept the challenge. "Number one: the challenge; demand satisfaction. / If they apologize, no need for further action."
Oh, come on. I can't be the only one to quote Hamilton.
Ah. So she has read the rules. Er, at least, the first part of the first rule.
That author is really going to get it.
8797083 Every question starts with "whose mother...?"
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Good ol' British humor.
I see someones’s a fan of Voltron
It kills me every time she gets cut off
time for PISTOLS AT-
Always a hit! Love your fics
GET IN THE BAG LUNA
YOU THINK YOU'RE GOING TO BECOME THE EMBODIMENT OF THE MOON OR SOMETHING?
Reminds me of another duel to the death with fake guns...
To to 0:34 to see what I mean.
That was a lot more random and silly with the imaginary pistol bullets, but it was rather fun nonetheless <3
Cuckleworthy at first, then I saw the Author's Note and it became favoriteworthy. Love me some 5sf.
8802648 I'm so glad to see that I'm not the only one that remembers those guys. One of only three youtube channels I subbed back in the day. It pains me that they could barely get half a million subs compared to other (terrible) channels.
8799508 Thanks for coming back!
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8796710 Am I the only one who hasn't seen this musical?
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It would appear so.
Dreadnought
IT'S TIME TO D-D-D-D-DUEL!
8796807
The moment I first saw this story I was listening to that exact song. I am currently listening to Non-Stop (second best song).
8804487
I really enjoy that song as well. Particularly:'
I've got so much going on in my life (working 40 hrs/wk, exercising 20 hrs/wk) and still trying to find time to write.
Dreadnought
You. Make. NOW.
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My favorite part is right at the end when George, Burr, Eliza, Angelica and like everyone else is singing at the same time, and thanks to an animatic I watched everytime I hear the “just you wait” at the end I see Jefferson with a smug grin on his face twirling around his damn golden pimp cane.
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I thought Jefferson was a little overdone. But then again, I am a fan of our third President.
Dreadnought
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Still, you gotta admire anyone who has the balls to use the words “loco parentis” and “quid pro quo” in rap music.
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Yes. I am quite the fan of Lin-Manuel Miranda. Have you seen In the Heights? I think it's as good as Hamilton.
Dreadnought
Why don't we still have pistols at dawn dangit! I DEMAND SATISFACTION. But for real, I can get some paintball guns for duels, think of how interesting solving fights with family can be. fighting over the remote? PISTOL DUEL. hogging the toilet? PISTOL DUEL.
Dirty Harry!!!! LOVE THAT MOVIE!!!!
https://youtu.be/8Xjr2hnOHiM
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Someone doesn't wanna share a gun? PISTOL DUEL. Someone caught cheating in a boardgame? PISTOL DUEL. Arguing that you pistol duel for the craziest of reasons? PISTOL MOTHERBUCKIN' DUEL!
This story about somes up my early childhood.
Brutal... Funny. Cheeks hurt.
Someone introduce Luna to Nerf Guns, stat!
Cap (group /organization)
___________
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Oh! Can you imagine Luna getting into Nerf Gun moddding? And sniping ponies with the Nerf N Strike Suction dart ammo.
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So damn fun, though the caps is not needed, it's not referring to them as a group, it's using it as a descriptive.