When crime runs rampant across Equestria, two individuals step up to help:
Officer Cord and Detective Shy.
Even if no one asked them to.
Artwork by SugarKills.
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As if Discord would listen if they objected
*Zootopia similarity intensifies*
I HAVEN'T EVEN READ IT YET AND I CAN ALREADY TELL IT'S GREAT AND POWERFUL
Your modus operandi for this whole story, right?
Still no match for Wheels and the Legman
Fluttershy is badass in this story, right?
I kinda wanna see their rock band. I hope maud gets involved by mistake.
Not bad, but you have done way better. Not up to par with the standards that most of your other stories have set for me. I mean, it is still funny, but deserves a rewrite to add more to the comedy.
Love this.
Is...
Is this...
Discord? In a comedy? Written PROPERLY?!
Witchcraft! Witchcraft, I say!
I have one thing and one thing only to say to this.
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I kept expecting him to deputize the cmc in some way.
Remind me when a waffle house opens up where I live i will go there and order pancakes then go to the IHOP and order waffles.
I generally try and order a wall when I go to the IHOP the waitress's generally have to ask what i meen. Im like it is the International House Of Pancakes why cant i order a wall.
Made me laugh though I did hope that there would be a real case solved by pure accident.
My favorite part was the high-speed chase part. xD
Obligatory rock star with tambourine picture.
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This is a funny blend between Zootopia, Roger Rabbit and Law & Order. Excellent!
Waffles are a key part of the justice system
This was nice.
7976556 Don't forget Pappa Wheelie, the smart-mouthed junior associate to Wheels and The Legman.
So Discord is Krampus?
So Discord is Krampus?
7976655 Just the right amount of crack.
Just the right amount.
The ending saved it.
Discord, you idiot!
Nice story, by the way!
Oh Discord... you are many wonderful things, but you are as far from the Law as it is possible to be.
7979152 Thank you!
7977567 I wasn't actually thinking about Zootopia while writing, but that's totally true.
7976609 Thanks!
7976607 Yeah, I would agree. I still like the idea, but the execution isn't quite there. Don't know if I'll ever try this idea again, but at least it's done and out of my head. Can't win them all, I guess.
7981927 True, let's just hope that this isn't a bad omen for the things to come...
7982189 Well, that's... a terrible thing to say. Doomguy and One Punch Man crossovers coming up! And don't forget all the clop! Can't lose then, right?
7982243 are you so certain?
7982322 Sorry. My comment was a bit salty. Was in a bad mood. But, yes, I do believe anything "Doom" or "One Punch Man" related has a better chance at getting noticed than others.
Delightfully absurd from start to finish, and as enjoyably fluffy as a good waffle. Thank you for it.
I don't why, but I would of thought that Discord would choose those vegetable instruments if he were in a band.
7983618 It got fluffier at it went along. I liked the friendship between Discord and Flutts in this.
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!
7983279 sorry, I was trying to sound ominous, and utterly failing. What I meant in more along the lines of "even that will not revive you from the fallout of having a really bad story" or "are you so sure that even something like that would help you?" More the second than the first. I really need to get better at my ominousnussnessessity {that is a word now, just so you know. Why? Because I want it to be a word.} If I ever aim to be a good villain.
Wait.
Would it be bad villain instead? Maybe I should have said not good villain. What about bad-good villain? Seriously, being a bad guy is hard.
This would be the funniest comic...hahaha
7984701 How about "competent"? Competent villain
7991940 Ah, (no?) thank you. I really need to find the villain's hoofbook.
7991940 ...or at least villainy for dummies.
Thank you for a fun and hilarious read!
7977631
What about donuts?
Ah Discord. You never cease to entertain.
This would make a great offshoot series.
I would have liked this more if, at the end when he hangs up his badge, all the suspects and things he spouted were actually all connected and spot on.
Aw man... I had planned on a story similar to this and already wrote it(although I was planning on making a series with with)... looks like that's out now... still a nice read.
Law Enforcement 101: Failed.
Fluttershy is a real trooper to stick with him through that craziness.
Heh heh...see what I did there? Trooper? Like the Law?
Ahem. Yeah, alright...a little lame. Ahem. Anyhwhooooo......
Discord is about as much the Law as one of those four hundred waffles he ate. Geez, that guy has a seriously 'waffle' addiction....
See what I did there? 'Waffle'? Like, awful?
I'm done now, I swear.
Loved this story! I laughed so hard!
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It would! I hope they do that after the series ends.