Pinkie Pie sits alone in a room with an unopened box. What's in the box, you ask?
Only everything.
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Ah, the vicissitudes of having a diverse fanbase ...
I only read Dark, Horror, Sad, and Tragedy XD
It's OK, no one's looking. You can punch me now.
Looking at the Title and description reminded me of this:
(Also reading it right now)
...
Well, that happened.
Interesting. They’re like little fic intros that originate from the same premise, but deviate into their own paths.
Edit: And then connect back together. Cool.
This was the best kind of stupid.
Now they're forever trapped in the last chapter. Now that the story is done, nothing can happen. So, I have a couple of questions.
What happens to horror now?
What about the anthro and 2nd person chapters?
And if I read the same thing over and over again, will they be stuck in a time loop?
Anyways, I enjoyed this story. Fun read right here!
Huh
7717409 Huh.
Didn't read it yet (saved for later), but all I could think of from the title was this:
Is... is this canon to Sombra the highly unmotivated's timeline?
Celestia I hope so.
Eh?
Well...
As a style exercise, it was interesting, I guess?
And this...
Getting some Stanley Parable vibes from this. I've never seen anything quite like it before. Well done.
So sad...
Awww
Heh, Heh. Clever author...
I love a good multiverse story.
And I agree with Doom Trot, I was definitely feeling a bit of 'Stanley Parable', as I read it. But am I wrong to think there was a little nod to 'Green Mile', in how you went about it?
The challenge to yourself, limiting each chapter to exactly 300 words must have been brutal.
Color me impressed.
I like this story. But what happened to Crossover?
This story is so meta! Wait, isn't that against the rules? Hm..
Great story.
Author, you should have written yourself into a 2nd Person Mature Crossover orgy between Anthro Pinkie Pie and Equestria Girls Pinkie pie.
Holy Hercules!
All of the chapters are exactly 300 words!
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7719003 Yep. Editing was fun.
7718983
7718649 As Random says at one point, the Author was choosing which genres he wanted to cover. To protect his ""image", he left out a few: anthro, crossover, EQ girls, anything sexual.
7718213 I've (of course) read the Green Mile, but I wasn't thinking of it while writing. Never heard of the Stanley Parable until now. I suck at video games.
300 words is almost fun -- in a painful way. It makes you look at what REALLY matters in a chapter while cutting the fat.
7717881 Thanks for saying so!
7717473 Sure, why not? Poor Sombra, though. There goes his couch/bed for all eternity.
7717409 "Huh" -- most people's reaction to my stuff. Followed by -- "This kid's eleven, right?"
7717393 Horror is either trapped in the unfinished story or deleted entirely. Anthro and other tags were omitted because I just didn't want to write about them. Not my bag. And, yes, if you read the story again, it would loop over and over again.
7717390 Maybe not my stupidest, but definitely my weirdest.
7717367 Just trying to keep things interesting. Doesn't mean they'll all work. Or even half of them. Btw, do you read all of my stuff? Even the crap?
7717351 Vicissitudes? Time to look up a new word!
Honestly, this story only works if you read it in order. Or at least from chapter 4 onward. I'm surprised so many people actually read it to the end.
7719217 I imagine.
7719249 ye
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Ye. (Missing a period and capital letter.)
Oh!
How does it feel to be corrected for once!? Ahhahahahahahahahah!
7719768 I hereby invoke the Law That None of KingMoriarty's Victims Have Ever Invoked:
That was deliberate.
Ah, the great, yet subtle mystery. Boy can this be vexing, even for the kindest of beings.
>what's in the box?
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Rise Pinkamena! Rise!
This was a wonderful read. Sometimes the best work comes from a strict structure.
Alright, I'll read them. If for no other reason than that you actually wrote 20 chapters of exactly 300 words each.
The title of this fanfic reminded me of Angelos from Shooting Stars...
The spice must flow...
I'm not sure what just happened, but I think I liked it.
Well, this should be an interesting story.
yes, yes my pink pony friend, eat the candy. eat it and get addicted, then burn equiis to the ground in order to get more.
open sesame is best password
well, that was fun.
very, and the night is very, very dark. which is why i like it.
dark universe takes the cake. away from foals. at a b-day party. and then killed the foals parents. because reasons.
pinkamena is the villian?! *le gasp* who would've thought? *phone rings* everyone expected this? what are you talking about?! *ends call*
they must've ignored the sign that said *dont provoke the author* or maybe the author is a troll, and didnt set any rules. also, mystery pinkie is best pinkie. so far.
whos the creepy stallion? sOCkS!!!
horror pinkie is best pinkie, i thought she died. or something.
um, random is right.
am i writing this? cuz i would be a horrible person and do something like that.