Tia is a girl whose home is near a railway junction. One day, while exploring the local scrapyard, she stumbles upon a curious-looking android that has been neglected for quite some time.
After some tinkering and polishing, Tia manages to get the robot working again, and she finds out that the cute little thing seems to have a mind of its own.
So why is it so upset?
Pre-read by randome284.
Proofread by AAIQU.
Edited by Dreams of Ponies.
Inspired by the story "Thunder Struck," by MerlosTheMad, though not related.
Cover art by Cannibalus on Deviantart.
Chapters (2)
...Did you mean to label this complete?
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I just fixed it.
Gonna be looking forward to reading this later.
Just wanted to say that that coverart is amazing beforehand...beforehoof....eh, whatever.
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I hope you enjoy it. More on the way, soon.
Sooo, are Celestia and Luna dead here? Or were these 2 simply chosen to have those names for the sake of having those names? Also, is Twilight here? And Cadance?
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This story is on Earth, everyone's human here.
Well, almost everyone.
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Oh, I get it now. So, why is Sweetie Belle on Earth?
Hmm... sounds kind of familiar...
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I figured it would have gave of an "Iron Giant" feel.
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I see we have fantastic taste in animated movies too. All the more reason I don't regret following you...
I usually stay away from human stories, but I'm really glad I read this one.
Can't wait to see the rest.
This seems like it should be marked "complete" rather than incomplete, but that, aside from a few, somewhat awkward to read sentences, it's a pretty alright story.
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It's multi-chapter my guy
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Aha, perhaps I missed something whilst reading. That would be my fault.
Hmm interesting
Seems promising. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
my god this is good like really good plus it has sweetie bot so that makes it really really good
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I got along to read it now, and i am looking forward to the rest of it
is the going to be more
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Thank you.
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There will be several more chapters, though I have other stories to write as well. I just wanted to get this sucker off the ground first.
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your welcome
By any chance was this a shout out to Kkat's work, specifically, the code Littlepip used to escape Stable 2?
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I was wondering when someone would point it out.
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You, good Sir, are fuckin GLORIOUS!
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why do parents always have the worst timing
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Luna even mentioned that she was at work.
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the worst part is its always when you are about to hide something from them too
Oh dear, that won't go well.
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Let see them talk their way out of this one.
Oooh! Please don't have a several months hiatus again, i can't wait that long!
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3 months isn’t that bad... sometimes stories take years to update.
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And that's a good thing?
anyone ever think the the everfree forest is based of aokigahara (Suicide forest)... meh i just think i have a dark mind
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I'm just saying I could've taken longer.
I would like for this to continue
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That makes two of us.
I hope this continues! It's sad that every robo-pony-on-earth story dies before completion, I would hate for this to be one of them.
Update please?