Fallen from the stars from his defeat by the hands of his most hated enemy, Broly, the Legendary Super Saiyan, was turned to stone for his violence. But as overworldly threats continue to plague Equestria, each more powerful then the last, Princess Celestia and the others had no choice, but to release the Saiyan of Legend to fight for them.
Can they control his temper? Can they calm his violent ways? But the bigger and the most bizarre question is. Can Broly possibly be reformed!?
(This story takes place after the DBZ movie 'Broly: The Legendary Super Saiyan')
Chapters (31)
I would like to say nice build up to Broly. Now i wonder if he'll go to same route as the universe 6 Legendary super saiyan Kale.
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I like how you described Kale as a Legendary Super Saiyan instead of Super Saiyan Berserk. I call her that as well because Legendary Super Saiyan just sounds better. I mean she clearly is one. Also, nice profile pic with Sonic.👍
This looks very promising
nice work look forward to a new chapter of it
*Residents, not *residence. The first indicates individuals living in a designated area. The second refers to said area. English is a tough language to learn, from what I've been told anyway.
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Thank you.
Already added to my fav's XD, love your BlackWarGreymon fic, I'm sure to love this one as well, I will start reading ASAP, I wonder how powerful Broly will be incomparison to the Ponies
I am just gonna leave this here:
Nice. I look forward to the next chapter.
I can imagine him being the abridged Broly asking ‘What is your power level?’ To every one
Awesome! I love the background you provided on what exactly happened so far. I can't wait for the next one!
okay.....I like the idea, but at the same time I kind of hope they have not an to easy time with Broly or kind of go overboard with their reforming.
I read that chapter tomorrow.
They’re gonna die.
I hope it's not another story, where they alredy know about the sayans and everythiong, why do they always have to play the allknowing sisters.
nice execuse
If he only screams one name, then how do they know his? I half expected them to call him kakarot.
I would still have liked it if he was a complete suprise to them.
Well at least they don't seems to know his species and even if I know about the ape and human thing, I always wonder why they thing of apes first when they have more than one species that walks like that and has features that maybe could remind them of humans.
edit: I forgot to say that I like it so far.
To be honest I forgot the good argument I had last time, but I liked to think that when it seems like they don't know anything about humans, then at least some of them could make that mistake.
hey b0ss can i habe new chapters pls
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He's going to be working on his BlackWarGreymon fic most of the time, so I think we will have to wait a while for the next chapter of his Broly fic
awww bummer, I forgot that it was anthro.
Well I liked this chapter anyway and I only want to remember you about my comment,
If you have a good reason for that then it is okay, but I would like it a bit different this time.
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I understand perfectly that you don't like the Alicorns being 'all-knowing'. That's ok, because in this story they're not.
So far, they don't know what Saiyans are and don't know that Broly even exists. These prologue chapters will tell the events of what happened that led to their decision in Chapter 1.
Another great one my friend. And I think it's great on how some people have ideas of where Broly would've gone if he hadn't crashed on Earth.
More please
Well, Broly's rage only comes to the surface when he hears Goku's saiyan name, Kakarot or when he is in the same planet with Broly and he feels Goku's presence.
So as long as our favorite saiyan doesn't come here and nopony (Yup, i said it) says "Kakarot" everything is gonna be ok.
The moment when the pony transforms into a bepidal ceature in my mind, yep I forgot about them being anthros again.
This was nice, but I would have preffered to see what is currently happening instead of the past.
I think the fight was alright, but what do you mean with true powers of the ponies?, because I was different versions if we take Celestia as an example. Some versions of Celestia and Luna appear nearly as strong as Hulk or Galactus from Marvel, being able to destroy worlds with their own planet (Moon/Sun).
Then there are some versions which I like more because they appear more or less realistic to me or I just choosed to believe in them, where they have weaknesses too and stuff like that, not bein able to shoot lasers from the sky or something like that. (With from the sky I mean like a satellite cannon with the moon or Sun.
Bullshit! He could have easily broken out of stone, enchantments or not. Elements of harmony stopping Broly...what a joke.
Woah.... WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER !!!
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You'll find out in a future chapter.
Nothing against this story, just a fact that I noticed and that is that I always need to get used to Alicorn or normal pony fighting in a Dragon ball z style.
edit: I mean I guess for their race or body (if they wouldn't be anthro), I always image a slightly different movement. I noticed a description that looked for Broly as if she was using a Kamehameha which is just a bit strange to me. I could image them either just using both hands while holding them foward or a bit like with the Genkidama, maybe even only using her horn instead of something that similar to how the Z fighters fight. (or how they are called.)
I just hope we don't get a "Fluttershy using her stare and creating terror in Broly's eyes."
There are just some characters or even persons with a stronger personality/different mindset than those from Equesteria, that I think it shouldn't affect them at all. I don't exactly let a "look what Fluttershy did to this or that character", count here since it's from their world and even then I sometimes thing she shouldn't exactly be that effective with everyone sometimes.
I'm glad however to get a new chapter.
if broly isnt stopped soon someone has to step in
GO BROLY GO GO
Yaay, it's alive! Now, to the next chapter! Oh wait, it's not here. Damnit!
HHhhhmmmm I guess it is still okay even if I'm never sure if I want the characters to know about potential techniques that they probably shouldn't know.
The way Broly is dominating the fight is often how Celestia looks to me in certain stories which I often don't like.
That means I'm happy that it's her this time who has all the trouble in the fight and whatever....(insert explanation).
That is more or less what i mean but I don't care since she get's her ass kicked. Just saying but there is no point in maybe trying to convince me about her power or whatever someone may plan to do.
It's a bit weird how equal both powers are when Broly overpowered himself and they used the elements on him.
I don't know how to explain it but I like to think there is a certain effect that caused him to be trapped instead of the elements actually being on his power level.
I mean I accepted and liked the fact that it was some kind of lucky hit that they got him with the elements and at the same time I'm suddenly unsure if I like how powerfull the elements seems to be compared to the Alicorns and Brolys power.
Was Broly in the beginning in his "muscle" form or did he had his body like when he is black haired?
I just wondered when I saw the description for his "green aura".
ahhh okay it was a lucky hit.
I haven't heard about the movie but Broly is one of the characters that I still love of the show even when not actively watching the show anymore.
Wow. I'm not surprised by the limits of Broly. I could only imagine how it would've been if it was the new cannon Broly.
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Oh man, Comparing New Broly to Old Broly is like comparing Old Broly to Celestia, Luna and Sombra in this fic XD, I mean, New Broly even before transforming into a SSJ was fighting on par with SSJ Blue Goku, then his LSSJ/Full Power SSJ/SSJ Berserker Form took multiple hits from SSJ Blue Gogeta, the New Broly is unreal
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I can't tell if you're angry or not? If so, I'm sorry for taking so long. I have a lot going on at home.
nice work looking forward to the next chapter.
yeeeessssssss
I was expecting one of the aliens to scan Broly's power level and yell "It's over 9,000!"
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that joke gets old once in a while
Wasn't tirek the danger?, why do we have the other Dragonball characters there now?
While it's not the same story it's somewhat nice to see them being overpowered once in a while.
Good that Celestia noticed the mistake.
I wanted to complain, but then I noticed that thankfully Rainbow and Applejack where thankfully no fighting experts if I can beliece those power levels.
Thank you for that one.
My reaction to Shinings Power level was just because I'm not the biggest fan of him and I barely like cadance more in most stories because of her manipulative behavior and power in some stories.
I won't change my mind easily on her so there is probably no use arguing with me about that.
I like what you did and thankfully it starts now.
Good ol RainbowDashVegetaFan123. Good with covers and power levels. And dude it's good to see a new chapter. I love how you had them get through to him. It was genius.
You Don't Say!?!?
Will goku make an appearance? 🤔
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Straight out of the movie... Nice!
And dun dun dunn! The Tree of Might crew are here!
So I'm curious is Equestria in Universe 7 or in another universe with villains that Goku and Co have defeated popping up every now and then cause i originally figure that this is set post ToP since I'm hoping that Freeza makes his appearance and sets in motion the events of DBS Broly without the Retcons.
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The location of Equestria is in Universe 7, but within a different dimension. Which would soon be detected by King Kai
As for the time line, this story takes place within the 4 years between the Buu arc and the Beerus arc.
I hope Celestia’s chefs know how to cook meat, otherwise their saviours gonna be PISSED.
Always nice to see The Ghost of Christmas’ Fall and his Band of Misfit Minions.
Oh shit...Turles and the crusher crops is on the planet.
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Interesting so do you plan on having Broly be a part of the events in Super? And are you going to change some things that need to be changed?
Like the tingling back crap?
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As of now, the only event in Super that Broly (and others) would take part in is the ToP. The Beerus arc, Universe 6 arc and the Goku Black arc would remain the same.
And a side note, I've learnt that the whole tingling back thing is actually an Asian consept. Where in some martial arts, people would feel their 'inner energy' through a feeling in their spine. They just used that real life idea in DBS.
Pretty good fight scene. Very in-line with how strong villains in DBZ toy with their opponents.