[Displaced Story]
[I don't own Dragon Ball Super or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]
My name is Michael, well... it was. Now I'm known as Goku Black, or Black for short. I was thrown into this world of pastel-colored ponies with magical powers a thousand years ago. I was happy, trained under my Teacher, Master Starswirl. Until another wanted control, I couldn't risk the ponies I cared about getting hurt if he got control, so with the help of the Princesses, sealed me in stone with the help of the Elements of Harmony. I don't know how long I've been here, but it sure has been boring. After what has been centuries, I feel like now is the right time to be released from my stone prison.
Chapters (23)
Lot more background onto why he was encased in stone, which is good. Can't wait to see how the story continues.
Okay I like the rewrite to the chapter that you did but you lost my interest in this story when you remade everyone into anthropomorphic ponies that looked like humans, other than that I like what you did, probably not going to keep reading though.
Don't get me wrong it's a good story and I love to find out what's next but I don't really like anthropomorphic ponies so that's kind of a turn off for me but really you should continue the story and see how far it goes, good job on this chapter! ^^
This has LOTS of promise, I am looking forward to reading this once it is finished.
Us mortals dont deserve to read something so divine
Not bad also you should have done what Disney genie did with 10,000 years can give you a crick in the neck.
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Ha, could've...
Maybe I could put in next chapter
Are you going to continue vegeta sacrifice ?
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Maybe, I'm currently stuck on Vegeta's Sacrifice at the moment.
Thank you for the gine joke
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No problem!
Perfect or should I say ......divine....
Good work on the chapter, though I'm going to imagine them all as 3 because I like 3
Such a dear honoring of the greatest genie ever to live.
I really like this so far! Can’t wait for an update!
You have no idea black. Be prepared for tfs reference. And 4th wall beaking.
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Something like this, perhapes.
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Well played... well played.
Im sorry my boi but you ain't black
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I approve.
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Perfect
Don't boost her ego goku black just dont.
TASTE DIVINE FURY
Bearers
nice chapter
Perfect
The reason that Pinkie can do almost whatever she wants is because cartoon logic, as long as it's funny.
Hmm...I think that a Saiyan who has reached divinity doesn't have to worry about the vacuum of space at all anymore. Also, I'm guessing that a Saiyan who has achieved a God transformation gains immortality as well, or at least a ridiculously long lifespan. While not mentioned by Toriyama, becoming a Super Saiyan God means that God Ki is absorbed and stays in the body, so immortality for divine Saiyans isn't out of the question. If that's ever brought up and confirmed, then I feel that it would be ironic when it comes to Vegeta, since he originally came to Planet Earth for the sole purpose of wishing for immortality in the first place.
All I can say is that YOU no how to keep us at the edge of are sits can't wait to see what you come up with next
is this goku black a good guy or not?
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I can say this Goku Black is good, but his methods of killing and torturing his opponents is still the same.
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like what kind um of (gulp) methods of killing and torturing 😅
Damn it cliffhanger!
Hey, are you up Goku Black? We
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lol
I have enjoyed reading this story several times and I am excited when you post the next chapter when ever you feel ready to post it just make sure your happy with your work because at this time it worth waiting for
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Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this comment means to me. There is good news in all of this, I am currently working on the next chapter and I feel like it’s almost ready. Can give an exact date when it’ll be released, but I hope before Halloween! I hope you have an excellent evening!
This makes me happy for 2 reasons.
Number one: you responded to my comment as well as gave a possible date for the next chapter
Number two: I made someone feel positive with my comment because in all honesty when one has experienced negativity for a part of there life they either want people to suffer like them or help others in anyway possible.
But yet I'm always smiling
I hope you enjoy and are having fun as you write your stories
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I really do have fun writing my stories. They usually just come right off my head off like ‘that would be a cool idea’. Sometimes I find myself stressed when writing a chapter or nervous half the time when I’m about to publish a chapter. But in the end, I always have fun writing stories.
That's good to hear I just hope you don't stress your self out to much because I know what to much stress can lead you
I really don't think nightmare would even last against a dupersaiyan much less Rose. Unless the power levels are different because he is not a true saiyian only a displaced but still, it was a good story but I kind of scoffed at the strength levels hehe.
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To be fair, to make dragon ball work with mlp and to be an interesting story and not be a one sided slaughter for the villains of mlp he had to either one, nerf his character, two, rework mlp baddies to be stronger, or three... rewrite how both mlp and dragon ball work entirely... which is something I've done multiple times to make both work... and lastly he had also trained luna as stated in previous chapters so adding nightmare on as a power up then this boost makes perfect sense.
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you also have to consider how displaced tend to work.
I enjoyed reading that, it was quite interesting with how strong you made nightmare moon and to be honest your fight scene was good but I believe you still got a long ways to go but there will always be room for improvement but always remember take your time and enjoy what your doing
Here was I thinking Akira Toryama was the author of this fic. What a let down.
Wherever Black is, no food is left to rot.
This is last part was shit
What an interesting crossover you have decided upon, I for one enjoyed it and excited for part 2
That happened out of the blue!
You should put the crossover thing on the start of the story though, so people won't be confused on what's going on, like i was really confused when i started to read the story, then i realized it was a crossover, just letting you know for future reference :)