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Denchik


I'm just a guy from Lithuania that likes writing and reading fanfiction, drawing, and exercising.

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During the battle against Son Goku, Goku Black and Future Zamasu anger Goku too much, which leads him to doing something different, defeating Goku Black. What will all of Equestria do?
Cover art made by me.
This is a Dragon Ball Super and MLP crossover.
Some spoilers for Dragon Ball Super. If you don't want anything spoiled, watch episodes from 48-67.
Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated!

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 138 )

Wow I can't wait to see what gokublack will react to what twilight did to him keep up the good work update more soon and question will there be a pairing in this story just wanted to know :twilightsmile:

I don't know if you have the perfect timing, or if I do. I was actually thinking about this story on FanFiction.net and if you would put it here, then as I was scrowling, here it was! I laughed myself to death after that!:rainbowlaugh:

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Idk about pairing up Goku Black with somepony to be honest. I may do it, but it's highly unlikely (I may do a pairing here if everyone really wants it, but on ff.net i won't)

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Well, to be fair, it's the people who moderate stories and you who have perfect timing (in this case)

Great story. It's personally one of my favorites. Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

Will other Mlp characters meet Goku Black?

7864042 Eh, I still find it freakin' funny either way!

Well, you've just gained a follow from me, as well as a fave! Keep up the good work!

7864042 Man, I'm gonna be honest, I'm really excited to see the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

Just wait when Goku Black wakes up. You better hope he's in a good mood, or you ponies will end up just like the rest of his victims

Woah this story is good so far. Also will you have Black saying his name is Son Goku like he did in Trunk's timeline, Zamasu, or just stick to Goku Black

I think he should be called Goku Black. That's the name Toriyama decided to call him

"Come forth, Dragon of the Gods, and grant my wish pretty please!"

The proper password is "Come Forth, Dragon of the Gods, and Grant My Wish Pretty Peas!"

Also...

"I'm already stabbing you, see?" coyly asked Black Goku, driving the ki blade deeper in to Goku's stomach, making the saiyan scream from the pain yet again.

Goku Black has a ki blade. Not a Keyblade or a χ-blade, but a ki blade.

Oh finally, I was so hyped for this!

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Glad that you have enjoyed it!

Today was no ordinary day though. Today, was her sister's birthday.

My freaking heart wrenched reading this line. Seriously, you did a darn good job writing out how Celestial felt. Can't wait for the next chapter, but mostly because I'm curious as to what Black's going to do when he wakes up!

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Finally, someone commented about how sad it is!
Glad you have enjoyed it!

I have a preposition for all of you.

PROPOSITION. You mean PROPOSITION.

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"Will Goku Black become good all of a sudden? Or will he become extremely pissed off, after mortals spared him?"
After reading Chapter 4, those two questions have been on my mind. I honestly am very unsure of how he will react when he awakens. And also a little uneasy.

You know... Goku Black is actually pretty scary in this chapter...

Love it :pinkiehappy: ! Keep up the good work!

Oh God, hopefully that reformation spell works before Black decides to destroy that world.

Nice can't wait for the next chapter.
I wonder how ticket master is going to plan out.

Shouldn't Goku Black be in this chapter? :rainbowhuh:

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While i did plan to incorporate him, i kind of got new ideas while writing, so he should be in the next one

...Shouldn't you say this story has massive spoilers for Dragon Ball Super?

7922690 Thats a pretty good idea actually... But i haven't spoiled THAT much (I think)

7904159 How did he end up losing the Time Ring? Also if he truly did lose he he should be dead due to Beerus having already killing his past self since the ring is no longer protecting him. Unless he is a walking temporal paradox waiting to implode on himself once he leaves the MLPverse.

Hmm either way he is well into character in this story so far. It be interesting if at the next opportunity arrives for Goku Black to dream that it be about his suppose "Utopia/Paradise" where his plan already came to be. With him and Future Zamasu enjoying tea. EVIL TEA. It appears peaceful and beautiful but feels just wrong to Luna.

This chapter seems to have ended quite abruptly. At a awkward place too.

7936579 So, I've rechecked the episode and it seems that he either has it, or he doesn't. It's most likely an animation error, or him preserving the ring, so that it wouldn't get destroyed (unlikely, since he is constantly fighting with the ring on)
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I am aware of that and I am rather sorry for this occurrence. If I had done an episode per chapter, there would be dbz related stuff, but typing such a long chapter will take a while.
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When will Black get out of the hospital?

Yeah Black is back! Wow that sounded alot less racist in my head

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Well, at least people will stop complaining about... A Lack of Black...
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That was terrible

I'm just glad we're finally deviating from the normal story of the episode, and no longer trying to "re-capture" it.
In Goku terms: Something different that involves the story.

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Indeed. I could barely await Saturday to just do this one scene! :pinkiehappy:

Please continue only goku black fiction out right now you're doing great

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Heh, thank you for your comment! I will eventually...

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He's back, in bla...nope. Not going to say it.

Okay, I just can't help myself.
He's Back in Black!

Also why do I get the feeling that our false saiyan is going to crash the galla?
Goku Black + Galla = Best night ever?:derpyderp2:

angry Celestia inbound... hope Luna isn't dead... otherwise... Goku Black done f:yay:ed up

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I want him to scare the heck out of Blueblood!

Now that I'm out on Fall Break and caught up on school work, I finally read the chapter! Man this was really fun to read!

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Honestly i never planned to write anything about the gala, i may look into it...

This was honestly a good chapter, I can't wait for the ponies to see Rose before their very eyes.

Is the story dead because it been a new year? Please let me know

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