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Love is a funny thing. It can surpass any barrier, transcend time and space, and bring any two ponies together.
Pinkie Pie understands this. It isn't really helping her find the courage to tell Princess Celestia how she really feels, especially since she might not be the only pony to feel about Celestia in that way.
Well, even if she doesn't tell her today, there's always tomorrow, right?
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... I didn't look at the tags. I wasn't ready for feels. I REALLY wasn't ready for feels.
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Thank you! I'm so happy some ponies enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥
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I have made somepony have all the feels. My work here is done!
Thanks for reading on! I take it as a compliment!
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... I want to clarify something, without seeming like a jerk. While,bthis story was, in fact, spectacularly written, I personally was not hit with feels. However, I know for a fact that if I were more susceptible to the written word, I WOULD have. It caught me off-guard and ALMOST made me have feels, which is equally impressive. Please don't take this negatively, I still think it was amazing. This was probably an unnecessary comment, but I always feel the need to correct this sort of thing.
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I am not insulted that every reader isn't hit with feels, don't you worry! I'm glad you liked it nonetheless. You brighten my day! Thank you so much for reading! ♥
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No problem. Thank you for not taking that as a rude comment to make a pointless correction.
I love this, but I'm sort of confused with the last part with Tia and Twi talking. Like why Twilight is upset. (I feel dumb btw)
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Click the link on the Author's note
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I've included hints in the author's notes. They're linked~
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(There are 4 different links~
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Lol. I was so confused whe I realized each of the words is a different link. I thought it's only one.
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Ah ok thanks!
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Oh. Ooooh. Oh... Wow, that just makes it 10 times more heartstring pulling than my first thoughts about it.
Damn... That all i can say.
Little details like the tired guards...
Oooooh.
Wow.
*Sniff*
I'M NOT CRYING!!! YOU'RE CRYING!!!
I honestly hoped for something else, I can't say that it was bad, but I prefer somethinge else and hoped to see them actually talk more.
Beautiful story, cuteling
MY HEART. WHY MUST YOU SHATTER MY HEART?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I loved this. I now ship Pinkielestia, and its thanks to you and its beautiful. This is also the only story of your's where, in my head, I'm going to mentally add a headcanon. That some day they cure Pinkie, and they get to live happily forever. Because those feels are too real, too good, that I legitimately feel so much for them that I feel they deserve that happiness. If that's not an example of incredibly good writing, I don't know what is. I didn't actually see the twist coming until it really hit, but looking back at it I saw a lot of the little details and hints that lead up to it, and holy crap that's good writing.Okay, it wasn't enough to make me cry at least, but still well written. Keep it up! :D
Oh wow, this is adora--wait, what about every day? What's going on? *Clicks link*
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It reached me, and I'm speechless. Thank you for your kind review! It means more than you know. As a dignified author, I totally did not squeak in delight and read it over and over. Totally.
(And the messed-up interpretation of the treats line wasn't intended. It was more just Celestia trying to make light of a sad situation, for what had to be the hundredth time at least. Maybe it's to convince Twilight again that showing up every day isnt a bad idea, maybe it's intended to get a smile from Twilight, who watches it happen, maybe it's Celestia attempting to convince herself like when she repeats the reasons to herself every morning, steeling herself to be forgotten and found like she has so many times before...
Or, maybe it's just a dumb cake joke. It's up to you!)
Thanks again!
Wow. I love the style for Pinkie's perspective.
And the end. I admit I was confused until I clicked the first link, and wow. Now I realize so much of it was there in such great subtle ways. This was really well done.
Wow, this has been quite a story! Nicely written Pinkie, still a little random, but not excessively so and the (sad) romance of having a crush on someone you can probably never get is beautiful in her narrative. And then the link in the Author’s Note... it changes the whole story to something even deeper!
Interesting ship. Like how you wrote Pinkie Pie.
Oh my...
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You... you read one of the stories I'm most proud of! I cannot believe it! I'm touched!
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I was surprised to see what else you've written.
I have definitely not been reading your best work before now. :B
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Yeah, you managed to read the work I was least proud of... heh.
I won't pretend I'm the best writer out there, but I'm still so proud of a few stories, this being one of them!
Thank you for giving my writing another chance.
It seems I never actually gave you a review notification here last year. Now, at last, fixed! Anyway: I was impressed by the first half of this, with Pinkie's voicing very good, something vital for a first-person fic. A little by-the-numbers after Twilight turns up, and I'm not a fan of external links (partly because I often read fics offline!) but I ended wondering about Celestia's judgement. Solid stuff, and easily upvote-worthy. So here, at last, you are!
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Thank you for the kind review! I'll take it being "above average" any day!
And wow, yeah, you have an excellent point about links not being available offline. I hadn't even thought of that. (Now I feel like a jerk, whoops... I read fanfic offline too!) I really should think up a way to remedy that... or add a second chapter with a bit more explanation. Hmm...
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You're very welcome. I think of it as more "good" than simply "above average". It was how you wrote Pinkie that ticked it up, from what I remember.