In the land of Equestria, the Wrath of Achilles comes. Sing, O Muse, of that rage that sent so many souls down to the dreary House of Death. Sing to me, O Muse! of the wrath that brought Ponykind to its knees.
I know it is a trope of these stories, but is he going to stay mute through the who thing? Getting I his voice back in the last chapter counts as that by the way.
8789287 i was never a real fan of the concept of the mute protagonist in these kind of stories, but i could see its literary purpose , so rest assured he will be getting his voice back but it will take a little time before we reach that point. i first need to reach the "third arc" of the story before he gets his voice back.
8818098 well, i will try to make this story in a way that is not required to read the books so that other readers like you don't feel lost but i would strongly suggest you read the books. they are a blast!
This is pretty good so far, some parts of the mc's backstory could have been explained better and there are occasional grammar errors. But the story is pretty solid so far and I cant wait to read some more.
8946459 i wanted to make this story in a way that as we move forward in the plot you will get to see bits and pieces of the main characters past. as we move forward in the story we will see more of what made Noah who he is and how he got there.
Noah spent the vast majority of his time letting these dark and painful thoughts cloud his mind, further dampening his mood and leaving him a brooding mess and, before he even realized what had happneend, 3 days had passed, finally standing before the very destination he had sought.
9387634 i'm going to be honest...sometimes i get confused with the metric systems. i don't use them very often when writing, adding to that that english is not my native tongue, so forgive me if i give incorrect measurements in my story from time to time. thanks for pointing that out!
I know it is a trope of these stories, but is he going to stay mute through the who thing? Getting I his voice back in the last chapter counts as that by the way.
8789287
i was never a real fan of the concept of the mute protagonist in these kind of stories, but i could see its literary purpose , so rest assured he will be getting his voice back but it will take a little time before we reach that point.
i first need to reach the "third arc" of the story before he gets his voice back.
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Woe, woe, woe, this isn't Asgard, this Is Midgard. That shit may work there but not here. ;D
Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Why does it always come back to Percy Jackson. Can no one just read the actual story
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what do you mean?
Curious, never read the books and only saw the movies, 1st one was way better the the 2nd, but so far this has my attention.
8818098
well, i will try to make this story in a way that is not required to read the books so that other readers like you don't feel lost but i would strongly suggest you read the books. they are a blast!
cool, can't wait for there world to be turned up side down and slaped silly.
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ohh,just you wait...
This is pretty good so far, some parts of the mc's backstory could have been explained better and there are occasional grammar errors. But the story is pretty solid so far and I cant wait to read some more.
8946459
i wanted to make this story in a way that as we move forward in the plot you will get to see bits and pieces of the main characters past. as we move forward in the story we will see more of what made Noah who he is and how he got there.
Moar plz
I like that the story is really an M classification and good description of characters
Happened
*cough* it can easily happen...
Ok, 10ft tall 5ft wide tree is not big, its thick. Now a 50x5 ft tree would be more believable for scare comparison.
And why combine the imperial system with metric for his height?
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i'm going to be honest...sometimes i get confused with the metric systems.
i don't use them very often when writing, adding to that that english is not my native tongue, so forgive me if i give incorrect measurements in my story from time to time.
thanks for pointing that out!