This story is a sequel to That little one
Exploring the ruins where they fought the pony of the shadows, Twilight and his friends want to discover why he hid there, did not imagine that the answer would be more questions.
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Alright, after reading all of this, I think you can have something but all of these chapters feel rushed out and the more rushed they are, the more grammar errors I find (Chapter three being the worst offender) but I think there's something here worth working on.
Why*
Older*
Do you think that the Princess know about this?"
Remove the comma
Else*
Verified*
9003765
re-edition time xD