Inspired by the song Rainbow by Koroshi-Ya
Rainbow Dash tries to comfort one of her friends after a rouge storm has injured Scootaloo.
One off to see if I can write sad/tragic.
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fuck, Koroshi made such a brilliant song
and this is a brilliant story to go with it
manly tears bro...
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Perfect Thank you I thought it felt a little ... off. Will have to do some post publish editing.
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Cheers mate
Oh look we got a spammer.
Anyway, i already listened the song, and i even made a translation in italian.
It reminds me of story from the song, but happened in Ponyville. I feel bad for both Scoots and Dashie.
"No, don't cry, you stupid oz! Do not cry!"
*cries*
Have you sent this to KoroshiYa already? I'm sure he will read this!
Now i'll just cry, hugging my pillow. (wait what?
)
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Hadn't thought of sending it to Koroshi-Ya. Sounds like a good idea. Thanks!
975612 You're welcome.
By the way, who drawn the image? It's well draw!
Made an account just to comment on this.
I absolutely love it! Loving the spin you took on the original song, some great stuff. Keep up the great work
Amazing!
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OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! Thank you for your kind words!
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The image is a stock image from the old Poniburoo site. The only source I had was the old link.
*notices Koroshi-Ya on the comment section*
OhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygosh!!!
I told you he would like it!
wish this was longer.
brillitantly executed but felt rushed
some great ideas here, wish i could see a full story on paralysed scootaloo, that has some potential.
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I was actually thinking of doing an extended version a week or so ago.
On your point of rushed what parts do you feel are rushed?
TOO SAD!!!
It was a teeny bit rushed but even still,
DEM FEELS!
WHY MUST I BE ATTACTED TO THESE SAD STORIES!
