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Chinthe


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Chez is the new head chef of Toss an upscale dining establishment in Ponyville. After working all over Equestria he has decided to follow his love of cooking one last time and settle down in Ponyville. But soon he realizes he can't just keep cooking all his life with no one to share it with. Will he find the mare of his dreams or will he continue to cook for orders for one at home?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 13 )

You've got some spelling mistakes, but over all, the story was good!

52563
Thanks for the heads up. Ill keep trying through the next couple chapters

A bit of grammer and spelling mistake....but the story is good!! keep up the good work:ajsmug:

Meanwhile, if you had time, plz help me reviev my story that i've written so far.... be honest k?? :yay:

you need a prereader and editor for certain parts that can't be fixed with . ,


otherwise good.

Yes, I thought for a long time Occulus was Rarity and even now I'm not quite sure who Occulus is.

52623
Yes I know I do need one and am actively looking for one. IF SOME ONE WANTS TO HELP ITS GREATLY APPRECIATED!

52908

Thanks for that I re-read it and found the spots I think you were looking at and have changed them accordingly.

awsome start, to an awsome fanfic i say, i hope you continue this one.

kind of an ominous ending... well done, keep it coming. =D

Wow an update. And I thought this was done for. Well looking forward to your updates. Keep writing! :twilightsmile:

869777

Hit a massive block... I thought it was dead too... :ajbemused:

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