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Well, colour me interested. Extremely interested.
What Jackelope said. More!
: "Normally I'm the 'test subject' for Twilight's weird experiments (even if they usually only involves explosions and mustaches). Hopefully she would let me participate later. I mean, it's with Rarity..."
Nope.
The moment I saw the picture on derpy I knew there would be a a story about this picture. Luckily I didn't miss it.
Looks good so far!
I'm curious what other things she will have to try out. (For science, of course.)
Oh this is HOT, I would LOVE to see what happens next to Rarity, maybe a portal into her mouth so she will be sucking other stallions off as others fuck her pussy and asshole, maybe even make it so she can be fucked by multi-cocks in the same hole but not be stretched out wide.
Holy shit another portal sex story i wish they have more of this.
Have myself been really interested in writing some thinking with portals stuff for a while now, really looking forward to this
For science
Love it!
More please?
This story seems good at first glance, but I have some misgivings. It seems like Rarity is really being used in this situation. Not to mention that everyone that has used these portals must know who it is on the other side. This would completely ruin Rarity's reputation. I could give other examples of Rarity being taken advantage of but I think they are obvious. I just don't like seeing submissives abused in this way.
: "That's quite an devilish idea..."
: "I love it!"
: "I know, Rares. Only the best for you."
: "If you would excuse me, I'm visiting the spa."
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Well the story kinda jumps in to the middle of an existing relationship, certainly Rarity and Twilight would have already had some discussions about boundaries, interests, and so forth. I don't think it's abuse if Rarity has made it perfectly clear that she wants to be treated this way and fully enjoys it.
It's also implied early on that Twilight at least has had sex with quite a few ponies around town. On top of that it seems Ponyville spa has glory holes and quite a few ponies lining up to use them — I think it might be safe to assume that attitudes to sex are a bit more liberal in this world than we're used to, so Rarity might not be judged as harshly as you'd think.
Beyond that, though, I thought I'd made it fairly clear that this is straightforward smut, with no real attempt at realism. Consensual, but not safe or sane. Was there any way I could have made that clearer from the outset?
Please tell me there are plans to write more stories in this universe?
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Well, I suppose not. Certain lines made it sound like Rarity wasn't fully enjoying it though, that's what got to me.
Just read the last chapter. That's way more like it, very enjoyable.
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Nothing planned, but I won't rule it out.
Good story!
Portals are quite useful, if you know how to use them.
Maybe they let poor Spike join one day.
My, that was... creative.
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Suggestion. Chastity panties just like the portal belt but the leg holes are portals also for that amputee effect with out the amputation. Could do a vest to for the forelegs.
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If you do then maybe...
Certainly a creative use of magic
does AJ own a horse?