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Tirek returns from the depths of Tartarus to exact his revenge on Twilight (the mare) Sparkle.

Warning: Contains Twilight Sparkle (and nuts).


Written in roughly 2 hours. Celestia, help me.

A big thank you to Shardikku for help with editing and advice. Celestia, help him.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

I don't know what I just read. But this was Glorious!!! :yay:

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:yay:

Your kind words warm the cockles of Princess Twilight Sparkle's rippling abs.

I liked it.

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x3

Good!

I look forward to your installment of "x fights Tirek" (remind me later to finish looking through that)

Mmmmm... Abs...

I don't undestand WTF happened in that story...

But I loved it anyway.

not my cup of tea...3/5:moustache:

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So each their own, I suppose. Thanks for the comment anyway! :twilightsmile:

I live with three film students and a graphics designer. They think they know what art is.
I thought I did too.
Then I read this.
Art...Art is

Tirek’s brow creased in thought. He spent several days considering this.

Along with pretty much every other line of this thing lol. Soooo many great lines.
Excellent.:rainbowlaugh:

Even Discord will be proud of you for creating such a mad piece of writing dude.

I get it
I don't get it

She must have kept time travelling backwards just to kill him again and again in new locations, 'cause she's just that good.

This is beautiful (sniffs and starts crying).

That was hilarious. I would like to draw readers' attention to one passage in particular:

“A friendly one,” she said, “If I win, you go back to Tartarus—the real Tartarus—and get to live happily ever after.

“And if I win?”

Twilight grimaced at Tirek’s interruption

And thus grammar nazis everywhere suddenly orgasmed. (For everyone else: Twilight's paragraph didn't have closing quotation marks, implying that the next paragraph should have started with her continuing to speak.)

However, in addition to other "errors" that I believe were intentional, I did spot one or two that I think were unintentional. Below, for your double-checking pleasure:

He deposited it before Twilight’s mighty muzzled.

Did you mean "muzzle"?

ultrathicc

I'm not that confident this was unintentional, but if it's not supposed to be "ultrathick", then I don't get whatever joke "ultrathicc" is conveying.

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Man, I love comments that add constructively to the story in question. :yay:

Did you mean "muzzle"?

Typo fixed, thank you!

So. That just happened.

Am I amused? I think I'm amused, but I'm too confused to be sure.

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Do not worry. Not many can handle bristling perfection of Twilight Sparkle's abs. :derpytongue2:

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Except equines don't have abs, unless they have a severe case of the heaves.

I've reviewed your story HERE!

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I saw this coming. Will go check it out now, thanks!

What just happened!?:rainbowlaugh:

Approved by Pinkie Pie:pinkiesmile:

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Oh wow, thanks! Now I can pin this badge onto um.... Somewhere, something. *sticks a Approved by Pinkie Pie sticker on the fridge*

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